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Surrogate Saviour - Radiance (Yarune Remix)
Helloooo.
About finished with a new remix, decided to put up a sample for some feedback.
Here's the link to it - Surrogate Saviour - Radiance (Yarune Remix)
4:01 | 136 bpm | 112 kbps | 3 mb
Feedback makes me happy! 
-Jay
peak, sounds good dude- i like the bassline very smooth, xylophone sounding synth is very sweet, i'm starting to use xylos more and more. I like how you bring the main synth/melody in- very proper fx. also needs more build elements here and there unless your going for a mellow feel.
PS. Feedback makes me happy too 
Quality stuff mate =)
All the elements are balanced nicely. EQign is pretty good.
Love the filtered synth at 1.32. Buildup at 2.50 is quite restrained but it works well. You could take it a bit harder but maybe thats not the style your going for.
The track has a MIKE'ish sort of feel to it. Quite sparse but with some very powerful, subtle elements to it.
nice stuff mate, nothing I can really comment on to make improvements as it is surpased my skills, only dislike I have to point out is the kick, it seems a little weak, could be because of the bitrate, but it sounds a little weak, I have the same problem when I'm not doing hard trance, I sugest trying raising the midranges slightly, dunno if it'll work, but it's worth a try :P
peace
Thanks for the feedback, guys!
Really like it mate
can't wait to hear the full version! 
Very cool remix. The first part of the sample kinda sounds flat, i think its the lead synth, maybe thicken it up. It sounds great later though with all the other synths to back it. I'm LOVING the gated choirs/pads/strings. Nice dark touch to a personal favorite of mine 
A+ work.
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| Originally posted by State of Matter Very cool remix. The first part of the sample kinda sounds flat, i think its the lead synth, maybe thicken it up. It sounds great later though with all the other synths to back it. I'm LOVING the gated choirs/pads/strings. Nice dark touch to a personal favorite of mine ![]() A+ work. |
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Yo, thanks guys, for the kind words!
@ State Of Matter: Did you receive my PM btw, I sent you the full of course..
Anyone else?
Chrs.
-Jay
Yeah Jay, I got it. Wasnt aware you had sent the full though, I'll check it out again.
The link thing is no problem, I just gotta finally get around to updating the page itself. I'll do it later today.
I don't like the first lead synth jay. It's to weak and noobish if i may say.
Gate on the background is nice.
i REALLY don't feel any drive, where is the huge bass? something like horizon?
i miss some emotion in the break jay.
Climax is good, but still no bass
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Imo fix the bass and first lead synth, this is quite good, just not good enough yet.
Yeh, that first lead must be changed. Now. I'm expecting that it's just filler for now. It better be.
The percussive, flute-like synth is nice, though.
Eh, the breakdown is kinda flat. Spice it up with some high end percs or something. Hats, Bongos, anything.
I like it. Once you fix that lead and put some energy in the breakdown, though, I'll like it even more. 
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