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first real music attempt..
Here's a song I did with fruityloops.. still very basic but I can't really think much else I could do with it.. plus the bass seems to stay a problem in this song.
I let a dj on my school play it in the "springparty" but the crowd reacted very positive.. still.. Im not satisfied with this.. can anyone help me?
)Here ye go !
Genre: Trance
Duration: 6:28
Bitrate: 256kb/s (wma.. srry cant render mp3's in some way
)
Let me see...
That kick is just too outdated... Sounds really fruity to me. I like what you did with the begining bass, but you maybe need to build some energy around it. It just sounds too muddy right now. I like the sequencer at 1:45, but I think you should hold that one longer. I don't like the breakdown, it's not only too empty... the steel drums sound like total horror to me. maybe you should give it a really dirty filter or something. And after the break, the real bass comes in. Too loud, imo. Really need to polish up your track, dude. I do like the melody, but the bass (after the breakdown) is just too loud if you compare it to the kick
you got me thinking about a total make-over 
I wasn't too sure about the steeldrums too you know.. I just wanted to be original .. still im positive that there should be a break with perclike things in it.. yea your right about the volume too..
im looking into that
btw what do you with "muddy" in "It just sounds too muddy right now."?
Thanks for your quick reply anyway! it helps alot!
ARGH 
Secodn time today this has happened. I type a reply, then either, i forgot 2 put a title in, or i posted a reply to another thread within 20 seconds of pressing submit on this thread, and i get a message telling me that i couldn't post, but then the message i typed has vanished, meaning i have to either type it out again, or not reply. Very annoying, posted in the Suggestions about this.
In regards to the song, i agree entirely with Messiah.
the song ended but i didn't hear a bass line. One would thicken this track up loads.
The steel drums, i think you should replace the drums with a lead synth or something, anything but the steel drums lol.
But its definatly better than my first song, which was just a bunch of crazy noises. 
I just started a thread about first attempt at songs Here, you could post yours there if its the very first thing u ever did?.
oh its the first real thing though..
not the first thing I eever rendered..
its the second thing lol..
the first thing was just 5 minutes of a rockguitarsound with all the effects I could make lo.. no im not gonna post that
edit:
nice signature Tech0rz 
keep your sources hidden.. love it
edit(2): Whats so wrong about the steeldrums? I cant hear it...
this song is TOO thin.... phatten it up nigga...
u got boring percussion...
@ 2:00.... how bout something other than pad-type thingy...
steeldrums? take em out...
@ 3:10... sounds cool.. would sound better if u phattened that synth up
@ 3:44 that lil OOP OOP OOP reminds me of that gooie thingy from zelda ITS GOT TO GO!
ok pretty much after 3:44 its boring... and repetive..
oh well, ok for a first timer
2.3/10
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| Originally posted by Takkra nice signature Tech0rz keep your sources hidden.. love it |
I bet he was into Sci-Trance...AHHAHA GET IT??? SCI ??? no? 
Link isnt dead..?
no im not a post-whore.
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It's my turn Takkra 
Eq is fucking bad, hmmmm...
I don't listen something message in your song. You must more, more working, becouse creation good music is arcyhard.
Work work work man!!
Greetzzzzzzzzzz
how long does a track stay on the yousendit server?? anyone know?
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| Originally posted by Sunclyder I don't listen something message in your song. You must more, more working, becouse creation good music is arcyhard. |
It stay really long on the server for what I know.. ive uploaded some movie file last year and its still there so..
Guys ok.. the song sucks but does the concept also?
im working on the bass and the percs really intensive now. but whats so wrong about the steeldrums? I also got positive reactions from people on msn (trance dj's, clubpeople) who like the steeldrums..
well of course its entirely up to you whatt goes into your song. But always some people will like parts others don't.
It's always good to have a concept. Then, there's alot more room for originality or style. I like to build songs on a concept, give them a flavour if you like. This song has flavour but not much style.
making a song is totally preference yes..... but remember, we're part of the people who will be listening to your music.
I think people on this forum have a good ear for music, so if "a mojority" of the people say somethings wrong with a song, they're usually right.
And ya, pretty good concept, different, but the steel drums gotta go
edits:
-No steeldrums.
-Synth LEAD
-Bassline included
-Not so boring melody anymore
-more sound experimenting
- it clips. HOW COME
Here's an update of the entire rebuild. this is simply a part of "The Break"
How's it sound? (without steeldrums lol )
[ click : yousendit ]
Yea.. my domain got some server problems still..
yea m8, this is definatly better than the steel drums. 100% more trance!
i suggest doing some research into Equilising, mastering, and sound levels etc. I think thats the next stop in your producing. Good luck!
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