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Posted by Jelle on Apr-01-2005 11:04:

[trance] Jelle - Summerbreeze

hi,

this is only my third track or so.

192 kbps, 5m:17s

made this during the last couple of days, a total of about 8hrs.

the meaning was to create kind of a "summer-feeling" song

entirely made in fruityloops 4 , with only the standard stuff.

lemme know what you think

download here

Posted by Jelle on Apr-02-2005 09:56:

anyone?

Posted by euphoria on Apr-02-2005 10:31:

Starts off kind of electro, I really like the melody after 3 minutes but this track could def use some better stronger synths and some effects after 4 minutes it kind of sounds 80's ish. Mayvbe a harder kick as well. Not horrible for a third track but i am a newbie myself so who am I to talk

Posted by Luke Terry on Apr-02-2005 10:45:

melody is really nice, production is pretty crap though. it would sound a whole lot better with a better bassdrum

Posted by Jelle on Apr-02-2005 11:04:

thx for reviewing!

yep that's my problem, the kick and basses.
I manage to make it sound quit good on my own speakers, but I find it hard to master something so that it sounds good on every system....

any tips?

Posted by Krogen on Apr-02-2005 17:25:

Intro -- too much beat. My speakers are jumping up and down
40 sec -- come on, what's with the Mario beat?
1:50 -- like it!
3:40 -- too much or too crappy drums.

To me, this sounds like music from the oldie hackers movie. Could be a lot better if you'd play with the beat cause the melody is quite nice.

Posted by Four_On_Four-er on Apr-02-2005 18:54:

I enjoyed it. The melody was indeed nice, but I, for some reason wasn't rubbed the wrong was by those drums... oh wait... ha, I forgot to turn my subwoofer all the way up! Yep, there's too much too early bass, but I'm still not complaining.

Posted by Jelle on Apr-02-2005 19:20:

thx for reviewin

im working on it!