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Posted by BrainWave2 on Apr-10-2005 18:41:

[Vocal Trance] BrainWave Feat. Tite Soph - Can't You See

Hi everybody!

I'm new on this forum but i have read posts here for a while... I produce uplifting trance music and i'd like to know what you think of my new vocal trance production.

http://brainwave4ever.free.fr/brain...20You%20See.mp3

EDITED : THE LINK WORKS!

Thanks!


Posted by Romi on Apr-10-2005 21:39:

Nice commercial trance track, nothing wrong with that. Maybe a bit too greedy with the autotune on the vocals, but the melodies are nice. I enjoyed it. Overall, it could sound a bit more pro i think, it sounds a bit simple now at times, maybe use some more effects.


Posted by Final Call on Apr-11-2005 00:16:

whooa dude!!!!..i really like this track.Good arrangement..nice melodies and your kick sounds good.I just dont like that simple boring.I like how u messed with the 303 bass..sounds good.I dont see anything wrong..but keep up the good work


Posted by BrainWave2 on Apr-11-2005 08:58:

Thx 4 ur comments!!

Yeah i think too that i have too much "auto-tuned" the vocals...

Romi > when u say "use more effects" do u mean add reverb/delay or add fx sounds?

Final Call >
quote:
I just dont like that simple boring
What do you mean? i dont understand... sorry


Posted by Final Call on Apr-11-2005 13:09:

ROFL..sry..it was suppose to say..simple boring bassline.


Posted by BrainWave2 on Apr-11-2005 15:52:

lol ok i understand better now! =)


Posted by Final Call on Apr-11-2005 21:31:

But what i really wanna ask you is...how the hell did u make your vocals sound soo good? any tips could be nice ..or what vocoder u used.


Posted by BrainWave2 on Apr-12-2005 09:59:

quote:
how the hell did u make your vocals sound soo good

perhaps because my singer has a quite a great voice...

i use a shure sm-58 microphone, the plug-in yamaha vocal rack and the auto-tune yamaha pitch fix...

and that's it!



Another thing : do you like the sound at 1:17? someone said to me that it has nothing to do in such a song... what do you think?


Posted by Final Call on Apr-12-2005 16:21:

your link is dead..so i cant tell u


Posted by AniG on Apr-12-2005 18:16:

heh, final call already said it .


Posted by BrainWave2 on Apr-12-2005 19:15:

yeah sorry about that the server is down atm

i'll post another link asap...


Posted by Luke Terry on Apr-12-2005 23:36:



still down like, was interested in hearing this!


Posted by iloop on Apr-13-2005 03:25:

i get error trying to download from link + when i just click on link- says : bad gateway


Posted by djAlexg on Apr-13-2005 16:47:

sounds very amateurish man..add more variety to your sounds.don't keep them so simple.nice melodies overall...and also get rid of that sound at 1:17 the rave acid sounds coz doesnt belong to your track..


Posted by BrainWave2 on Apr-15-2005 19:13:

thx for ur comments!

ok that's what i thought, the sounds at 1:17 are not for such a track... i'll replace them by something else.

djAlexg > i'm not a pro, that's why i'm here lol! but u're right this track is too simple... i will also work on an extended version.


Posted by The Drow on Apr-16-2005 18:42:

MEGA CHEEZE
I don't like this, it's not even trance.
I think it's eurodance. *pukes*
But actually it's better then most eurodance.
I know it sounds harsh... sorry about that.
I'm not trying to be rude or something.
I also doesn't have anything agienst you.
The vocals are ok.
I would add more delay and reverb on it.
The autotune is ok. Check delerium - after all to see whats a realy good autotune...

overall 2/5
sorry dude.

p.s.
I need a vocalist, can u send me a dry sample of her voice please.
I know it's not nice since i was like that with your track lol
I feel really bad.
pm me ok?


Posted by IDarkISwordI on Apr-16-2005 19:01:

Hey. Well, my ony complaint is that its too short. It is a bit on the euro side but in a good way, sounds somethign like QED - Hardly A Day. I would recomend that you maybe listen to Whiteroom - Someday a bunch of times, and get down the trick with using square waves to make it a more modern progressive trance track. Thats just my opinion though. Obviously The Drow has a bit different opinion lol. Wow man. That is pretty straight forward. Its cool that your honest about the way you feel about the track but then after bashing it, you expect to use the vocals from it? Lol...

Cheers,
Zac


Posted by BrainWave2 on Apr-17-2005 13:25:

thx 4 ur comments!

the drow > it's not trance? yeah perhaps it sound euro but i think we can call that euro trance? or am i wrong? what sounds/drums dont you like? which sounds/drums sound like dance to your mind?

darksword > i dont know the tracks u told me the i will listen 2 them... and i'll do a longer version! =)


Posted by The Drow on Apr-17-2005 17:37:

as i said, everything sounds so cheezy...
the melody sounds like eurodance and euro trance is uplifting trance.
this is just commercial stuff.


Posted by JoeyEnv on Apr-17-2005 19:13:

Not bad, pushing more towards Euro than mainstream vocal trance.

Interested in remixing though. Check PM!


Posted by AniG on Apr-18-2005 08:52:

doesnt sound too bad, its very simple here and there, but i like the way its sounding to me, seems like everyone's wanting the voc for a remix tho :P

but yeh, its a little eurodance more than trance :S!

its not bad, its actually a nice song.


Posted by BrainWave2 on Apr-18-2005 10:00:

JoeyEnv & AniG > ok i'll send u the midi file and the sample of the voice... in which music styles do u want to remix this?

the drow > why do u want a dry sample of her voice?

thx for all ur comments =)


Posted by The Drow on Apr-18-2005 10:09:

i'm searching a vocalist
pm me her mail if you can


Posted by AniG on Apr-18-2005 12:24:

probably hardtrance or my usual progressive trance.


Posted by linkmage on Apr-18-2005 12:44:

Claps - too crunchy(I think need much high frequences)
Bass - Good
Arp - can be warmer
Pad - awesome
Harmony - to commercial
01:17 - to much low frequences(need filter wirth high freqs)
02:33 - need different kick,and I think very soft drum loop

Vocal - great

overall - keep going dude,nice work,greetz

i had pleasure


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