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Posted by Aesthetic on Apr-21-2005 00:14:

dave begic - in too deep

hey guys.. just working on a tune atm and would love some feedback .

www.davebegic.com/28march.mp3

i know at this stage the breaks need attention..anything else you guys would like to mention about it?

all feedback is much appreciated

-dave

Posted by eulerfx on Apr-21-2005 00:29:

Heh, nice track name. Would be nicer here, if Oliver Lieb hadn't already used it.

- damn nice bassline
- the bass drives the rest of the tune down. i think you shoudl bring up the leves on the other parts and maybe do some EQ work
- breaks sounds prety good, but could use some more hats in there, and just a little bit more attention to detail
- afterward, the tracks get a bit repetitive.
- overall, i'd say defiantly work with that bassline, maybe tweak the synth a little, and put more elements on top.

Posted by Axolotyl on Apr-21-2005 04:08:

...and if smith and pledger hadnt used it too...

Nice psy style sounds at the start.

Percs need some work. They sounds pretty tight, but very standard imho. Some subtle vaiation in the hihat pattern or something might be nice. That synth at 1.30 sounds a bit weak at first but then it comes in pretty nice.

This is very proggy, not my sort of thing at all, but I can appreciate the sound your trying to create. Theres some nice subtle changes throughout it that manage to keep it fairly interesting.

..btw, what happened to my review? You promised one and then nada...

Posted by Aesthetic on Apr-21-2005 04:52:

thanks guys for the reviews, i will definately take them both on board when i go back and work the tune more..

axol - man i tried leeching yours but kept getting an error.. can you pm me a direct link so i can finally hear the tune?!

Posted by pkcRAISTLIN on Apr-21-2005 08:10:

sorry dave, i didnt like it. but you know i prefer it faster and with LOTS more cheese i thought the production quality was pretty good though, and the beat/rhythm certainly got me tapping my foot. id just prefer more synth melody, but you already knew that

keep up the good work

Posted by tylerc on Apr-23-2005 04:54:

hey man, i really like the sounds you have goin in this. the bass is awesome, the synths sound great. the tempo is just faaaaaaar too slow. its like its trying to be a prog tune but it has all the big anthem synths and elements. i really like the progression too, very original. that breakbeat could use some cleaning up too. other than that it sounds very nice, just tack another 8bpm or so on.