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[Chill / Prog Trance] Untitled (128kbps)

well heres a tune i started a while ago but only recently been working on it. it was meant to be progressive but ended up quite trancy.

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all feedback welcome of course.

Updated: 26 April

- percs are a little too common in intro and they seem kind of detached from the track, and u should change that clap.
- bass + synth sound pretty good, but they repeat too much. its pretty much the same thing for 2 minutes
- the breakdown is a bit empty. add noise fx in there to give some atmosphere and drive, so the kick doesnt come back too suddenly
- overall, i think this is a good start, but you should keep working to add more elements, i.e. make the strings louder.

yea, i struggle with drumloops :/ i'll have to listen to alot more commercial stuff.

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Originally posted by mark_the_gooner yea, i struggle with drumloops :/ i'll have to listen to alot more commercial stuff.

don't listen to commercial stuff. listen to Juno Reactor.

ok. ive done lots more work on the track now, would like some reviews =)

and gave it a name too

Hey Mark,

Sounds pretty cool.

I think that melody that repeats from the beginning could use a little variation. And background pads are greatley missed

I like the dirty bass that comes in after 1:30.

I think overall the tune needs a little more variation, especially in the percs. I like the 'sticky' rim shot loop - that's funky.

You've got the right idea - keep at it!
Trevor

Hey Mark,
Nice track, very minimal but it works and it gives a really nice feeling of space on the overall mix.

Keep up the good work.

cheers
Nem

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