[Sample] Phynn - Lucid [Klangzentrum's Deep Red Remix]

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Posted by Klangzentrum on May-02-2005 11:10:

[Sample] Phynn - Lucid [Klangzentrum's Deep Red Remix]

hey guys!

after a lot of learning for my exams lately, i�m finally back with a new sample!
it�s a remix of phynn's track 'lucid'...
but somehow i stuck at the point where this sample starts and ends...
so i'd like to ask you for some ideas...also some feedback about the sample itself would be cool....

Phynn - Lucid [Klangzentrum's Deep Red Remix] - sample

thx in advance...

// Lars

Posted by Subtle on May-02-2005 13:13:

this is fcuking aweosome... i love it.. find nothing wrong with it.. except its too short though...

9/10

Posted by Mane on May-02-2005 19:00:

great bacground add more fx's and thats it everything else is really good keep it up

Posted by Klangzentrum on May-02-2005 21:01:

thx for your feedback so far, guys!

hope you�ll be content with the finished version, aswell, when it�s done!

anyone else wanna give some criticism on this piece of crap?

Posted by Hanki on May-03-2005 13:03:

It's great! But If I were You I'd change the bassline EQ a little bit + add some nice softy sounds to the background. But mainly it's worth listening, good work m8!

Posted by sooper on May-03-2005 21:15:

Hey Lars..!

I haven't heard the original, but I'm really enjoying your remix. The steel drums give it a sweet vibe.

the f/x and atmosphere are awesome - you did a great job there.

lots of energy, and your percs are great. The hi hats that come in at 3:33 sounds a tiny bit dry.. maybe some reverb would help? Maybe a little variation in the melody would be nice.. but this track is pretty solid as is. Excellent work!!

Looking forward to hearing the finished track,
Trev

Posted by Kenidel Lopez on May-04-2005 05:00:

Enjoying what you have so far.

Try sticking a lower-pitched version of the lead in there to go along with the one you have now.

-Kenidel Lopez

Posted by staticblue on May-04-2005 09:37:

sounding nice mate! quite original sound combination too.

Posted by Jay M on May-04-2005 10:01:

Hmm I get an overall feel of this which isn't bad, but not good at all tho. There's just no power whatsoever is this remix. The percs are very (and far too) minimal. The snare roll isn't too good fitting here.. it's quite chilling trance and a harsh drum like this doesn't do any good IMO. The open hihat is a wrong one I think, these are used in the 90, nowadays they're far more crisp and have less color. No extra elements are added to the synth layers of the original, you even tried to copy most of the synth sounds.. Now that's a choice you can make, but you can't make a chilling mix with the uplifting sounds of the original. I'm also missing a bunch of fx here to keep people alive. In the first minute e.g. there's just nothing happening.

Of course, the original is a great track and you got a good atmosphere in your track, I read the idea, but a good remix takes more than this..

Sorry to flame this down, but it just ain't that special as others posted.. maybe I'm just disappointed because of the unwillingness of my fellow reviewers to post negative criticism..

Posted by Klangzentrum on May-04-2005 11:13:

thx for the feedback, guys!

and it�s not a problem to flame on it! this helps a lot to get to know what's wrong with the track and to improve it! so i�m glad about any negative criticsm...
although i wouldn't call it negative, but helpful criticsm!

Posted by Jay M on May-04-2005 11:28:

quote:
Originally posted by Klangzentrum
thx for the feedback, guys!

and it�s not a problem to flame on it! this helps a lot to get to know what's wrong with the track and to improve it! so i�m glad about any negative criticsm...
although i wouldn't call it negative, but helpful criticsm!

Glad you see it this way, I hope it's that useful to hear your tracks improve in near future

Posted by Klangzentrum on May-04-2005 11:57:

quote:
Originally posted by Jay M
Glad you see it this way, I hope it's that useful to hear your tracks improve in near future

for sure it will help! i guess it will even improve THIS track...
and the mainpoint you post your tracks here is to get feedback! so why being angry about it, if somebody just wants to help you...

Posted by Massive84 on May-04-2005 17:59:

Starts a bit to happy for me, also the melodies are happy

imo break is nice done.

That rolling closed hat is to loud, also i rather make them subtle for drive instead of loud. Rythem in perc can make wonders.

Not very keen on the bass either.

I prefer your previous work, this is just not my taste soz :/

Posted by PutBoy on May-04-2005 18:40:

Nice. I have to agree on the "helpful critizism" though ;D This could be an awesome track, haven't heard the original though. Kewl melodies ;P I kinda like.

Posted by Klangzentrum on May-04-2005 22:39:

still thx a lot for your feedback!

@massive: i guess you like my previous work more that this one, because i mostly posted "finished" versions! and at this one i stuck, as mentioned above! i hope i'll can finish this one aswell, so as many ppl as possible will like it!
but you�ll understand that i have to try some new sounds...

i�ll let you know, when i worked on! hopefully i�ll find some time!
not much time atm!

if anybody else wants to reply, it would be very appreciated...