Paulo Der Munoz - Garden of Whispers (TRANCE)

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Posted by PDM on May-05-2005 04:27:

Paulo Der Munoz - Garden of Whispers (TRANCE)

Hi everyone,

This is a track, I'm getting ready to send out, but before I do that, I'd like to get some approval or disapproval.

Title: Garden of Whispers
Author: Paulo Der Munoz
Style: Epic Trance
Mp3 Quality : 320
BPM 140

Thanks for your permanent help, people.

Garden Of Whispers at Dance Industries

Posted by Brady on May-05-2005 05:46:

lovin' the piano... ill relisten tommorrow and give you some tips over aim.

Posted by AniG on May-05-2005 09:19:

nice track
tunes a bit odd, but its cool

Posted by thoughtlessjex on May-05-2005 23:19:

That break at around 0:13 was cool.

I liked it. Nothing was very outstanding, but it was a fun listen nonetheless. It had a very chilled atmosphere, which I liked.

Posted by cybernetica on May-06-2005 01:07:

Nice tune, really well balanced sound, every element is clearly audible and works well with the rest. I dont like the kick that much, it might be a matter of taste, but in my opinion it could have less "oomph".
Interesting melody progression, sounds weird but cool. Good work, keep it up!

Posted by Gladius on May-06-2005 09:58:

wow this is really great material. and so original!
the piano stuff is awesome as well!
more plz

Posted by PDM on May-06-2005 13:31:

Thanks for your comments, when I get positive feedback here, it only means I'm going towards the right direction, now I'm sure how to get things done.

Posted by brianbartel on May-07-2005 04:39:

Wow, I've gotta agree, the piano is great! Don't love the synth in the beginning but it works once everything else comes in. Personally would go for a tighter kick, but that's just my preference. Overall I really dig it. Definite props for originallity!!! Keep up the good work!

Posted by PDM on May-07-2005 18:28:

Thank you brian,

Everytime someone replies it gives me the chance of having a nice smile in my face.
Thanks

Posted by Nomen Nescio on May-07-2005 21:35:

Hey Paulo,

I have just listened to your track, before I say anything about the melodies and the trackbuilding, I first have an important suggestion: find a better kick. This kick you use is pretty horrible to be honest The kick distorts and has too much low end, therefore during the track it sounds muddy and ugly.

Now as far for the trackbuilding and melody: very very original and intresting. The piano break is almost genius like , really really good. Too bad nothing really happens after the break. The energetic build up of the track gets lost after it. I expected a nice leadsound to be introduced during the break.

Percussion of the track is great. Mastering is very poor. The track sounds hissed and has too much low frequencies and hardly any clarity.

I see the track is 140 bpm. Maybe you should make it a tad slower because the track now sounds a bit rushed. also try to make a longer intro without pads, that is nicer for dj's

Anyways over all a good effort and I think you now have a nice starting point to make this track a lot better than it already is.

Cheers!

Nomen Nescio

Posted by Axolotyl on May-08-2005 04:27:

Cool, some nice spooky trance here. I love that airy arpeggiated synth you bring in at 1.35. The lead up to the break is very well layered. Good choice of synth sound both with the leads and the bass. The kick does get lost though. Try eqing the lows of everything else to give you kick some room to work.

I really despise pianos. I think I had a bad experience with one as a child or something I guess it works pretty well but I'm kind of left wondering as to what the purpose of bringing it in was. Maybe you should carry it through after the break.

Posted by PDM on May-08-2005 07:59:

So, don't you really think that it would cause a good impressio if I send it out as it is now, even with that kick?

Why I didn't do back ups, 3 days ago, I got infected (my PC) with a Virus and I had to re-format everything.

damn...

Thanks for your comments mates.

Posted by Romi on May-08-2005 10:00:

First, i really like the melodies, a bit chaotic (a bit less reverb/delay) maybe. The pianobreak is also very good. So lots of good elements here.

What's a real downer is the kick, it's just really bad man, definatly get a better one. The structure is also a bit weird. When this is better produced with better sounds it should be awesome.

Posted by Denser on May-09-2005 17:32:

quality tune man!

trance the way it is meant to be..

good luck

Posted by Alekos on May-09-2005 21:50:

Pretty nice track, however I think you should get another kick ASAP. If you want I'll be more than happy to hook you up with another kick, just PM me.

C.A#13

Posted by PDM on May-10-2005 05:29:

Thank you very much, thanks to your comments I'm getting my @ss in front of my computer to produce the track from scratch again.
Hopefully it will be as good as it was.
If I had back up, the only I would have to do is change the kick and decrease the hissing, oh well. *sighs*.

Posted by PDM on May-12-2005 05:32:

Hey People!!

I have finally reworked the track again, you'll notice a lot of changes, hopefully those changes will be for the better of it and not to make it worse.

Please tell me what you think.

I changed the kick, this one has less 'omphhh', I made it using to kick presets of Albino 2 and then I EQ'ed them so it will sound dry and crispy.

quote:
http://s23.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=0OPY1U0HT6UAK3C1XP16G6QE31

Thanks for your so much appreciated help, one way or another.