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Posted by LiGHT78 on May-17-2005 16:52:

Screenplay

Alright, before I'm on summer vacation I have ONE more assignment left to do for school....I have to write a godamn screenplay for a 5-10 minute long movie with dialogue. I don't mind doing it....but as with every other school assignment I do, I'm having a pretty hard time trying to start it out, so to COR I have turned. You guys have any ideas for a short movie? and I KNOW you do. Who knows, maybe your idea will go to a film festival one day, everyone will love it and we'll both become millionaires.


Posted by Jim on May-17-2005 16:55:

If your short movie is anywhere near as big as your sig you'll do great


Posted by Slylee on May-17-2005 18:11:

sounds like fun! i have a goal to write a screenplay too, i even got the screenplay writing for dummies book it's the damn software i need though, the format is confusing.


Posted by igottaknow on May-17-2005 18:16:

Re: Screenplay

quote:
Originally posted by LiGHT78
Alright, before I'm on summer vacation I have ONE more assignment left to do for school....I have to write a godamn screenplay for a 5-10 minute long movie with dialogue. I don't mind doing it....but as with every other school assignment I do, I'm having a pretty hard time trying to start it out, so to COR I have turned. You guys have any ideas for a short movie? and I KNOW you do. Who knows, maybe your idea will go to a film festival one day, everyone will love it and we'll both become millionaires.

maybe you can use Jason hot tub romp?


Posted by dj tek on May-17-2005 18:18:

write about bunch of ppl gathered pregaming before a party... that shouldnt be too hard..


Posted by Mr. Pink on May-17-2005 18:21:

Rasta

Assuming you know the format and that it should be 5-10pgs long , you're set.

ideas, i got plenty. I had to write a few screenplays last semester.


think surreal. Dont play the normal card. I hate that. At the end of my class 3 plays were picked to be carried out into real plays and mine was the first one picked.

it was about about a guy in his apartment who had anger management/ OCD at the same time.

he'd wake up, throw his alarm clock against the wall, smashing it all over the place....then take a shower.
a maid walks in and lets him know she is there, cleans everything up.

he seemingly hurries to finish his shower and put on clothes, and the moment he gets out, she is gone.

he sits down, opens a drawer, and has a picture of her.

then lights change, salsa music comes on *she's latina* and they start dancing salsa....he is surprised he knows how to dance to begin with lol.

after a while, he realizes this is all in his head, sits back down, she leaves, lights go back to normal, and he smashes the picture frame against the wall and ends up sobbing.

it was just a surreal play on something tragic. It was mainly about his love for her, and she would never know about it......unrequited love *sigh* the horror!

but it was nothing out there, nothing in your face like some one getting raped (like all the other kids in my class tried to portray). Apparently THAT was tragedy.

stay away from ghey horror movies and played out stuff. Go for something psychological/philosophical. Even something simple. If you can capture simplicity in a creative fashion, you're set.

maybe im not making sense.


basically, be crazy, be original.

i had a screen play with ONE word in it.......and the word was "goodbye"......i mainly played with camera shots and atmosphere.....you can capture a lot of meaning without words.

think creative, s0N!

dont write something boring and mundane like everyone in your class is bound to create.

if you want an answer with more substance, PM me...


Posted by igottaknow on May-17-2005 18:28:

some kid in video class also did a movie on OCD so I guess its not as original as you think but it true horror movies are done adnausium


Posted by dj tek on May-17-2005 18:29:

quote:
Originally posted by igottaknow
some kid in video class also did a movie on OCD so I guess its not as original as you think

why you hatin...lol


Posted by Mr. Pink on May-17-2005 18:29:

Rasta

quote:
Originally posted by igottaknow
some kid in video class also did a movie on OCD so I guess its not as original as you think


mine wasn't about ocd.

that was just one of the odd ball character traits for my main character, ya g00f



Posted by igottaknow on May-17-2005 18:30:

quote:
Originally posted by dj tek
why you hatin...lol

sorry i'm a hater today


Posted by Mr. Pink on May-17-2005 18:31:

Rasta

quote:
Originally posted by igottaknow
sorry i'm a hater today


dont make me go over there and whoop you.

ill do it

im CO-RAY-ZEE!!!!


Posted by dj tek on May-17-2005 18:32:

quote:
Originally posted by igottaknow
sorry i'm a hater today

all good.. hate on !


Posted by igottaknow on May-17-2005 18:33:

quote:
Originally posted by Mr. Pink
mine wasn't about ocd.

that was just one of the odd ball character traits for my main character, ya g00f



the movie wasn't about ocd the main charcter has it and you see the world tru his eyes. by the end of the movie you figure out he has ocd.


Posted by Mr. Pink on May-17-2005 18:34:

Rasta

quote:
Originally posted by igottaknow
the movie wasn't about ocd the main charcter has it and you see the world tru his eyes. by the end of the movie you figure out he has ocd.


[hates]

you're gay

[/hates]


Posted by Slylee on May-17-2005 19:40:

oooh!! i have a goal to write a screenplay, even if it doesn't get looked at or whatever. i think it'd be fun. i have "screenplay writing for dummies" and other books about it, but it's the software that i need. the format is foreign territory for me and all the lingo is different too. it's like a whole diff planet of writing. it would be so much fun, but it's hard to find time and motivation to do something like that between school and work...i wish it was a homework assignment for me.


Posted by UWM on May-17-2005 19:44:

quote:
Originally posted by Slylee
sounds like fun! i have a goal to write a screenplay too, i even got the screenplay writing for dummies book it's the damn software i need though, the format is confusing.


Slylee I'm referring you to the Department of Redundancy Department


Posted by igottaknow on May-17-2005 19:51:

quote:
Originally posted by Slylee
oooh!! i have a goal to write a screenplay, even if it doesn't get looked at or whatever. i think it'd be fun. i have "screenplay writing for dummies" and other books about it, but it's the software that i need. the format is foreign territory for me and all the lingo is different too. it's like a whole diff planet of writing. it would be so much fun, but it's hard to find time and motivation to do something like that between school and work...i wish it was a homework assignment for me.

you only need a formatting program if you want to get published. You can flesh out your ideas in a treatment and then get into the screen play. Google up samples to get an idea of what goes into it. You can always format it later on. The most important part is being able to write believable dialog and present things in a fresh way.


Posted by Slylee on May-17-2005 19:52:

quote:
Originally posted by UWM
Slylee I'm referring you to the Department of Redundancy Department


why? did i already say that?


Posted by igottaknow on May-17-2005 19:54:

quote:
Originally posted by Slylee
sounds like fun! i have a goal to write a screenplay too, i even got the screenplay writing for dummies book it's the damn software i need though, the format is confusing.


quote:
Originally posted by Slylee
oooh!! i have a goal to write a screenplay, even if it doesn't get looked at or whatever. i think it'd be fun. i have "screenplay writing for dummies" and other books about it, but it's the software that i need. the format is foreign territory for me and all the lingo is different too. it's like a whole diff planet of writing. it would be so much fun, but it's hard to find time and motivation to do something like that between school and work...i wish it was a homework assignment for me.


Posted by Slylee on May-17-2005 20:00:

oh woops. i thought that post never went through?? my browser is being weird today.


Posted by Slylee on May-17-2005 20:11:

quote:
Originally posted by UWM
Slylee I'm referring you to the Department of Redundancy Department


i can think of a few departments to refer YOU to.


Posted by UWM on May-17-2005 20:13:

This ought to be interesting.


Posted by Estella on May-17-2005 20:17:

Re: Screenplay

quote:
Originally posted by LiGHT78
Alright, before I'm on summer vacation I have ONE more assignment left to do for school....I have to write a godamn screenplay for a 5-10 minute long movie with dialogue. I don't mind doing it....but as with every other school assignment I do, I'm having a pretty hard time trying to start it out, so to COR I have turned. You guys have any ideas for a short movie? and I KNOW you do. Who knows, maybe your idea will go to a film festival one day, everyone will love it and we'll both become millionaires.


I would tell you, but then I couldn't use it for my own creative writing class. Maybe I'll see you at Sundance or Cannes


Posted by jonze on May-17-2005 20:26:

I saw this in a movie about a bus that had to speed around a city, keeping its speed over 50, and if its speed changed, it would explode! I think it was called, 'The Bus That Couldn't Slow Down.'


Posted by UWM on May-17-2005 20:28:



Heart Simpsons.


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