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Posted by 0_SlipStream_0 on May-19-2005 11:22:

My first track

Hi guys

Let me know what u think about this track

Slipstream - Slipstream(original mix)

http://atomiced.com/Slipstream%20-%...inal%20mix).mp3

Any feed back is welcome
thanks

Posted by Invertika on May-19-2005 12:10:

hey,

firstly, word to the Aussie producer, the invasion is beginning

anyway.....
Cracker of a tune, but a few production issues:

the tune starts off pretty well man, the kick is nice and the reverbed synths give it a real industrial feel, but at around 0:57 when it all comes in it gets a bit cluttered and muddy, and for most of the tune the kick dissappeares.

Like the breakdown, but when the supersaw comes in at 4:12, its just a bit too loud, it drowns the track. Gets better between 4:40 and 5:10, that bit is just brilliant, but again is let down a little bit at the drop, it probably won't take much, just a few tweaking of levels and some eq etc

Keep it up, this could be a classic!!

Posted by websley on May-19-2005 17:09:

Hello there,

I'm impressed of the synths in this one, really warm and uplifting. However, I suggest you tighten up the bass, or add more structure around it. Part of the early discribed muddy sounds might disappear. Rhythm is probably the only weakness in this Trance song, they either sound outdated or dry. Especially the clap is just too dry. More percussion or groove would be nice in this one.
Focus on the mixing, because some sounds just are too loud at the moment, but my predecessor is right: This could be a fine classic tune

-weBs

Posted by Jay M on May-19-2005 17:22:

Hi.

Track is clipping. A lot. There's way too much volume on some sounds in here, and it's very muddy. So you need to do some EQ-ing.
The guitar thing plays some ugly notes in there..
Some pads are quite nice.

For a first production this ain't that bad. Keep practising.

-Jay

Posted by Magnus on May-19-2005 19:00:

Not bad for your first track at all! Nice work! Along the lines of what has been said, your kick is a little weak and becomes lost with everything going on. Your clap as well sounds a little thin. Definitely work on your EQing, experiement around, and you'll be good to go.

Posted by 0_SlipStream_0 on May-20-2005 06:40:

Thanks for the feed back guys. All your input will be taken into account.
Ill keep at it