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[ Progressive (v2) Darktrance Themelike..] Takkra - Trackerball

oyea.. so its here..
can anyone maybe help me out with some suggestions.. cant really think think of something to continue cos im kinda drunk.. oyea its bad at my age but im almost 17 so shite :P

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reply moi vite s'�l vous pla�t I think..

Took a good look at your sig, hehe

Good haunted atmosphere, I like the synth thingy that comes in at one minute and a half {Numbers on my keyboard aren't working} Also the sci-fi sounds in the background are cool. Maybe it needs more wickedness or something. Only thing to do is to enforce the evilness of the song, by using very abrupt sounds or SFX.
Dark Trance sure is a thingy going on at TA, ay? Well, I like it, let me know if it's updated

-weBs

ok.. im working on the track now @ this very moment.
completely pure and sane .
Ill have a closer look to some fx.. I just made the ones you hear by luck so.. hrrr...
Thanks for your reply weBs
Anyone else?

Hey man,
Listening ... Hehehe, very Computer sound FX intro :P, I like the Muted synth u use in the very begin, maybe it has too much reverb on it though, but I like it, it has a funky feeling. I like the semitone u use in the Fat sound, is very sweet.
In overall, not my genre, so I cannot give u a real opinion, just lacks of Drums, because they are a bit simple for the moment, kick/Snare/Hats, etc, I would try adding soem congas and shakers, or a loop.
I like it, keep the good work man .
Kopi =o.

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the intro is nice,i specially liked the bass line at the begining,the mastering sound very nice so far too,i really dont many complaints whit the drums,maybe just as kopi sugested some shakres or lite things here and there but is just a matter of taste,i liked.if you want to make me a review here is the link to my post


http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=266753

i think this is the basis of a great tune, and this is the sorta trance i play/spin.

i have to say that making the sounds a lot more "dirtier" qwould imporive it, like rougher, raspier synths.

also a harder kick maybe (although this is more a personal prefrence )

I dont know what to say, I think you made this track in 5 hours....
maybe more percs or loop? MASTERING (need tracks bouncings,because your bass is overflowed other elements

NICE WORK DUDEY ,not my style,but....cool

actually I made all loops in 2 hours and put it toghether in 45 or so minutes ..
but ive gotta make it moooore dark and evil and twisted so im sending in some padzz and PERCS yes im working on them..
guys thanks for all your replies! ill have a look into the bass too.. and the tb303.. so much .. but,
Im definitly n�t going to change the melody and the atmosphere..
mastering isnt actually something im really good at so..
i think I did pretty well with my 4 weeks fruity/vanguard/ACID experience .

If anyone else has some critism or suggestions.. i'd gladly accept them !

UPDATE

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(4:48 is just a joke )

Well I checked the old and the new update, let me say you did major changes in this new update, cleaner sounds and such, but I still think the bass is overshadowing the rest of the track elements.

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Originally posted by PDM Well I checked the old and the new update, let me say you did major changes in this new update, cleaner sounds and such, but I still think the bass is overshadowing the rest of the track elements.

I dont really know what you mean by

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the bass is overshadowing the rest of the track elements.

Is it too powerful/hard/messy when you compare it to the other elements?? should I turn the bass down or the rest up?
somebody help me..

cool, dark and techy

more high end percs, some compression and EQ (your pads are spilling all over the mix, centralize them maybe), especially on the kickdrum

the bass needs to be less loud, this is especially noticeable around 1:20. cool acidy lead.

you definitely keep the elements coming, and you keep them fresh.

more percussions, duck the bass under the kickdrum, and lower it a little; compress, compress, compress, and a little eq, and you'll have a solid track.

thumbs up

mmm

Hey takkra... am now subscribed to forumz
Nice theme you made there, some elements are bit missing though.
it needs a lil bit of spunk in it. the dark sounds are gd.
<>Convergence<> hehe

Keep up the good work

Your breaks seem to not compliment the rhythm of the rest of the track well. I'd suggest fixing the kick to be more reminiscent of the lead.

You need to get some more sounds and energy in the higher frequencies. As it is, your track seems small without a full frequency range.

In fact, in general, the track could stand to be louder. EQ and Compression needed.

4:48 may be a joke, but you should keep it. It's totally awesome, IMO.

erm.. sorry I dont really know what you mean by

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You need to get some more sounds and energy in the higher frequencies. As it is, your track seems small without a full frequency range.

I just started producing actually could you describe it another way please?
4;48 ? Ill think about it

to sayoon

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some elements are bit missing though.

wich elements

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Originally posted by Ste i think this is the basis of a great tune, and this is the sorta trance i play/spin. i have to say that making the sounds a lot more "dirtier" qwould imporive it, like rougher, raspier synths. also a harder kick maybe (although this is more a personal prefrence )

exactly ! thats my style .. I just cant seem to get just that little right touch

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I just started producing actually could you describe it another way please?

What I'm trying to say is that your treble sounds aren't of equal volume with your bass sounds. Maybe make your hats louder and advance the treble on your snare's EQ. Heck, you should probably make your snare louder in general.

When I say you need a full frequency range, I mean if you look at a spectrum analyzer of your track, the treble side of the analyzer is largely silent.

You should probably read up on EQing and compression to get a good idea of how those those concepts are used to make your tracks louder and fuller.

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another update.. it started to sound different.. don't know if its good or not
well what do you all think?
should I work on this one or the other version?
or both , and what should I work on.. except the endings

U improved ur sound a lot with the update dude, this is going to be a kick ass track bro .
Kopi =o.

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