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Posted by kopi_luwak on Jun-01-2005 17:06:

Ibriza, Mellow&House Trance , Full Direct Download!

Hi,
This is my latest track, this one is Mellow&House Trance, not my clasic chilled out stuff :P, so I think u can shake ur ass off with this . The name of the track is a word play in spanish, Brisa means Breeze, sort of like Ibreeze in english .
Feedback as always is very welcome .

TRACK NAME: Ibriza

UPDATE: New Bass added, Compressed the whole track and fixed some details with the drums.


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Kopi =o.


Posted by IDarkISwordI on Jun-01-2005 17:43:

Hey.

-Great chord at the beginning. Sounds mellotron like .
-The percussion is decent. I think the surrounding percussion (taps and whatnot) could use a bit of a volume boost.
-The bassline is ok. Its a bit muted. Try adding some resonance into it so its more audible. You might also apply a chorus or something to expand the sound to be more fat. It just seems a bit dry right now.
-Good synth string. Its very well placed.
-Mmm . The piano is great.
-The break is good here but the bassline seems to clash a little with some of the notes, especially around the 5m mark.

Overall, decent track. I'm always a sucker for songs that bring in a lot of Disco elements . One thing you might also try, if thats what you were truely going for, is a bass guitar vst like reFX Slayer 2 or if you are using FLStudio, the BooBass plugin is a very nice bass emulator. This would give it a much more disco feel and personly, a better sound in my opinion . Good mellow song.
Grade A

Cheers,
Zac


Posted by kopi_luwak on Jun-01-2005 17:45:

Thanks mate, true about the bass clashing, Ii think i forgot to deleted another bass pattern and that's why sometimes clashes, also gonna boost a bit more the bass :=.
Kopi =o.


Posted by fake_illusion on Jun-01-2005 17:51:

Very chilled, I like the style... Things you might wanna add: some more variation in the percussion when the track progresses. Around 4:00 I have the feeling the bass is not fitting in. And as said above, the bassline is a bit muted. For the rest more than decent!


Posted by Massive84 on Jun-01-2005 18:58:

mastering could be better.

2.19 dont like that progression of the bass.

everything sounds nice, but the mix sounds so hibernating. compress, mix it a bit harder etc.

Piano is really nice, i also like the rhodes ,

nice small fx used

I grade it 7/10.

can be better


Posted by Sunclyder on Jun-01-2005 20:01:

Hi Kopi

You must change bassline, becouse not adjust in this style!!
Pads are simply, piano melody is fine, we are by-the-way melodys??

Overall not bad!!

Greetings


Posted by Takkra on Jun-01-2005 20:47:

Yo kopi my man
isn't yousendit great lo..
just listening.. really good chill tune,
something you'd want on the radio when your relaxing on the beach !
just take a look @ the bassline.. its the only thing that would need some attention, and maybe make the shakers a bit more clear.. th clap is really good !
overall: lovely


Posted by kopi_luwak on Jun-01-2005 23:02:

Thanks to all for ur feedback .
I fixed the bass, added a new one, actually two basses layereds, compressed the whole shit, and fixed some other details, thanks in advance!
Kopi =o.


Posted by RiCo on Jun-02-2005 03:44:

Dude, this song kicks ass...reminds me a bit of Janeiro, hehe. Only thing I REALLY dislike is that bassline...sounds too open...can you close the cut-off a wee bit and lower the decay a little so it's more stabby and tight? Everything else I'm not even gonna complain...the track is nice as heck!


Posted by kopi_luwak on Jun-02-2005 05:13:

Hey man very thanks for the feedback, I am having a real bad moment fixing the bass line , I will be awake whole night trying diferent styles of bass .
Kopi =o.



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