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(TRANCE) Goddess - Live To Die 192Kbps 6:12 Full Track

Ok, if anyone remembers where I was going with this track it has completely changes after putting 2 more days work into it. Let me know how you think it sounds now and what else it needs changes/comments welcome and apprectiated.



Thanks
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Changed the bass added some more effects - here is the new link (sound any better)

Goddess - Live to Die Edit 3




Genre: Trance
Time: 6:12
Quality: 192Kbps

Well, you forgot something really important.

The bass...

The Ambience is Incredible.

The drums sound like tribal house gone wrong. I suggest a harder, more prominent kick, and of course a bassline of some sort.

Love the melodies and ambience though, try filtering out your background synths for builds and lulls.

this is sounding much improved

the percs are ok, just a bit light. there needs to be a bass presence otherwise the track will lack substance.

everything has it's own place in the mix and sounds are not competing which is a really good thing which many producers struggle to do.

the rapid improvement you have made is really impressive, keep up the good work

Sounds very goood!

There is a bass in the song. When i changed it I turned it down because i thought it was too loud so now I guess its too low. I will turn it back up and update

Hey,
Listening .... I will avoid any mastering comments cuze I am using my Pc speakers . Drums sounds nice, nice Pads/Piano, u have a really good athmosphere here since the begin. This could be a very cool progressive tracks working out the build up for that, all the elements are well place, and all the layers are interacting well with each other .
In overall, very cool track, if you would work more the build up into a progressive track this would kick ass, keep it up .
Kopi =o.

Re: (TRANCE) Goddess - Live To Die 192Kbps 6:12 Full Track

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Originally posted by ZzZ The Goddess

Hey mate
-The pads are great & create a sweet breezy atmosphere.
-The hihats are piercing!!
-The ping-ponging bongos are ok & give a good spacial effect to the song.
2.33 I love the pads that enter at this point. I would have love to hear them go on for longer (& maybe build up with dual layering).

This track is pretty much the same all the way through without much progression. I enjoyed this style you have created, as it has all the elements to sustain it, though I feel that a couple more layers need to be added to build it up some more. This track does grow on me the more I listen to it; I can see it being a theme to sci-fi movie for some reason... Every sound flows well together.

Anyway, great job on this one Goddess.

Xeno.

I threw some heavier bass in and added some extra effects. I am probably going to work on some layering next but this is the update I have for now. Let me know if it sounds good or suggestions on how to make it sound clearer and crisper.

Goddess - Live to Die (edit 2)

I think I hear unwanted distortion of some kind on your kick.

The bongos seem kinda weird, although they don't detract too much.

Now I definitely hear distortion. Do something about that, man.

Once I get into the track, the bongos actually add to the atmosphere. I'd say add the bongos when there's an atmosphere for them to compliment.

You still need a bassline. Something to fill the song out a bit more in the low end.

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Originally posted by thoughtlessjex I think I hear unwanted distortion of some kind on your kick. The bongos seem kinda weird, although they don't detract too much. Now I definitely hear distortion. Do something about that, man. Once I get into the track, the bongos actually add to the atmosphere. I'd say add the bongos when there's an atmosphere for them to compliment. You still need a bassline. Something to fill the song out a bit more in the low end.

The unwanted distortion was when I added the bass, it not the kick if you listen to the previous edit of the song. No one can hear the actual bass? well I guess I have to fix the bass again. Any tips on how I can get a nice bouncy bass without all that distortion. I turned the bass up mainly because no one was able to hear it.

I have the same problem, btw u have improved a lot, I remember listening to ur first track on here and I could say u are another Producer .
Kopi =o.

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak I have the same problem, btw u have improved a lot, I remember listening to ur first track on here and I could say u are another Producer . Kopi =o.

Thanks I am really trying and have been putting alot more time and practice into it. When I first started I knew like next to nothing and I am definetly learning more and more as I go along and everything is just sort or falling into place and making sense now. I am going to keep trying harder though

Methinks also you are married with a Producer or sort of, lol ..:P.
Kopi =o

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak Methinks also you are married with a Producer or sort of, lol ..:P. Kopi =o

Well on that comment you are way off. Well I am married but not to any producer. My husband couldnt do it if he tried, now put a video game in front of him he will beat it in an hour. He is moreso a computer junkie than anything but def not a producer. I wish he was maybe I would actually have some in person help and guidance.

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Originally posted by kopi_luwak LOL ... damn, I really though u were married with a producer or sort of, and geting all the tips from him lol ... btw, KOPI LUWAK, halo 2 GT :P. Kopi =o.

I play Halo but I dont play online. I just moved my X box to my bedroom cuz my dvd player broke and my internet is in the living room where the PS2 is connected.

LOL ... damn, I really though u were married with a producer or sort of, and geting all the tips from him lol ... btw, KOPI LUWAK, halo 2 GT :P.
Kopi =o.

Yet another update on the track, the first page has the new link. I added more effects and changed the bass again. Let me know if you still hear that distortion. Thanks

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