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Posted by [-dp-Sensuerea] on Jun-15-2005 12:01:

Smiley DJ [Trance] Matt Darey - Nocturnal Delight (Damian Prus Remix) - 192 Kbps

Hello,

Finally i finished remix of this awesome track by Matt Darey.
Please listen to it & write something about. All comments are highly appreciated.


Matt Darey - Nocturnal Delight (Damian Prus Remix)

Cheers,
Damian


Posted by Icone on Jun-15-2005 13:29:

Hey Damian!

Just had a listen to the remix. I think the sounds are alright, though the remix itself is very lacking in structure... It feels like it's going to the main part way too fast and stays there for about 4/5 minutes. Just take care of the intro & outro and add perhaps a little break and it'll be just fine.

I'm not too fond of the type of 'electric' sounding stab you used, doesn't really sound all too interesting to me. The snare riffs are also a tad too overwhelming I think.

Keep it up!
Wim


Posted by Klangzentrum on Jun-15-2005 13:42:

decent kick!
i'm not a big fan of that sonar sound at 0.42...
bass is cool!
i agree with wim about the structure of the track!
listen to some other stuff and see how the structure of most trance tracks is (i mean it's not a rule but something like a unwritten rule, which most producers follow)
the choice of synthsounds is good!

// Lars


Posted by [-dp-Sensuerea] on Jun-15-2005 16:48:

Thanks You guys for comments&tips. Build-up is definitely bad, but it was maked quick. Thats because i got another track, which i'm working on, so i decided to finish this remix, as fast as possible. Im afraid You be only, who write something about my sample

@Klangzentrum: this sonar sound is from fx'ed crashed delay. In 0:42 filters goes up, and You can hear this ugly sound. I forgot to remove it. My bad.


Posted by [-dp-Sensuerea] on Jun-16-2005 19:42:

Any 1 else to comment? Im noob, so i want hear all You have to say.


Posted by Tholius on Jun-17-2005 04:08:

Hey,

I thought you should make the intro longer.

Choose some non electro sounds. Breakbeat is basic, but good.

The clap? doesn't quite do it for me either.

Sounds a bit muddy with all those sounds together aswell.

But I reckon it's a decent try


Posted by [-dp-Sensuerea] on Jun-18-2005 08:27:

Thanks Tholius I promise to make a better build-up in my next tune


Posted by Luke Terry on Jun-18-2005 11:33:



your production definately has a lot of potential.

keep it up!


Posted by [-dp-Sensuerea] on Jun-18-2005 17:48:

Oh, thanks for that! Im glad, that not everyone thinks im poor-noob


Posted by Subtle on Jun-20-2005 00:27:

a noob is often spotted on the way he "looks" .. and u dont "look" like a noob, u may sound like one, but we`ll see (!)

listening:

niiice kick and introduction effects, nice raw bass. wish u let the bass go on only one note in the beginning, i think u introduces the melody a bit too fast in the track, although i dig the effects and synths u have used..

i love that sharp synth in the background, u have a nice drive going on through the whole tune.. good job.. u could freshen it up a bit though,

7/10

Subometer:
6 starting to sound like something
7 good track.. needs a bit of work
8 nearly there
9 listenable
10 *signable*


Posted by [-dp-Sensuerea] on Jun-20-2005 14:36:

quote:
Originally posted by Subtle
a noob is often spotted on the way he "looks" .. and u dont "look" like a noob, u may sound like one, but we`ll see (!)

listening:

niiice kick and introduction effects, nice raw bass. wish u let the bass go on only one note in the beginning, i think u introduces the melody a bit too fast in the track, although i dig the effects and synths u have used..

i love that sharp synth in the background, u have a nice drive going on through the whole tune.. good job.. u could freshen it up a bit though,

7/10

Subometer:
6 starting to sound like something
7 good track.. needs a bit of work
8 nearly there
9 listenable
10 *signable*



Oh, thanks for the comment! Im glad, You almost like it



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