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Posted by d!abolic on Jul-07-2005 02:07:

My first portrait

An emotive portrait taken at Toronto's Ontario Place in June 2005. This is one of my first attempts at artistic photography.

"I LOST HIM"

Posted by rabbitjoker on Jul-07-2005 02:17:

Have you done more than this one?

Posted by Tordan on Jul-07-2005 02:20:

Looks more like she's waiting for her head to be chopped off at the guillotine. And are her lips touching the railing... eww. You should have asked her to take the earings off. I like B&W shots.

Posted by newtotrance on Jul-07-2005 02:26:

looks like she is going to fall off the boat. but nice pic.

Posted by VERTiG0 on Jul-07-2005 02:36:

O HERRO RAIRING TASTE GOOD

Posted by LKD on Jul-07-2005 02:37:

quote:
Originally posted by Tordan
Looks more like she's waiting for her head to be chopped off at the guillotine. And are her lips touching the railing... eww. You should have asked her to take the earings off. I like B&W shots.

i was tihnking the exact same thing....

and people say i suck with the camera...

Posted by techead on Jul-07-2005 02:38:

very cool
Love B&W

Posted by rabbitjoker on Jul-07-2005 02:39:

S&M is good.

Posted by DarkAngel on Jul-07-2005 02:43:

quote:
Originally posted by newtotrance
looks like she is going to fall off the boat. but nice pic.

Or perhaps vomit.

Posted by Vivid Boy on Jul-07-2005 02:47:

it fuckin sux like ur life. why dont u 2 bang ur head off the railing and end it already

Posted by starsearcher on Jul-07-2005 02:52:

lol you and your asn girls or was it a girly boy from thailand?

Posted by DigDeep on Jul-07-2005 03:29:

it would've been way better with another guys cock in her mouth..... and it was entitled -

"I lost him, but found something else"

Posted by jrmacca on Jul-07-2005 03:47:

wow....tough crowd

it's a good pic....

b&w is awesome, although i prefer sepia

Posted by Silky Johnson on Jul-07-2005 04:06:

Her earring looks like a sperm.

Posted by Xavier Moriarty on Jul-07-2005 07:08:

Re: My first portrait

quote:
Originally posted by d!abolic
An emotive portrait taken at Toronto's Ontario Place in June 2005. This is one of my first attempts at artistic photography.

"I LOST HIM"

welcome back dude.

good pic, keep up the good work.

Posted by starsearcher on Jul-07-2005 13:18:

quote:
Originally posted by jennypie
Her earring looks like a sperm.

just as he would have liked it I'm sure

Posted by AdReNaLiNa on Jul-07-2005 14:42:

it's nice.. big fan of B&W photography

it would also work well as a cover of a hairstyle magazine

Posted by Jem_hadar on Jul-07-2005 16:37:

i liked it -- thought it lookd cool.

nice photo man.

~Jem~

ps. I like the earings in the pic -- they grabbed my attention.

Posted by Nikitha on Jul-07-2005 17:00:

Its a really nice picture... maybe next time you should just open up the frame a bit and that way ppl will see a little more them just her hair.. if it was a wider shot and you could see her body position it would probably give off more about her emotions in the picture.. the black and white was a really good choice
keep it up..it looks like a really good start

Nikitha

Posted by TrueToTheCrew on Jul-07-2005 17:08:

looks like an asian girl G'd out on a railing.

Posted by d!abolic on Jul-08-2005 00:36:

quote:
Originally posted by TrueToTheCrew
looks like an asian girl G'd out on a railing.

someone photochop in a "CLUB VIVA" logo!

Posted by ++ EGO ++ on Jul-08-2005 01:31:

it seems like anyone with a half decent camera is considered a photographer,
just like it is with all the leaked software of photoshop and illustrator, except that makes them a designer.

not to discourage you from your new found "artistic" ability but all I see is hair in this shot. someone even mentioned her earings look like sperm, when the photo is that uninteresting, people will notice all the wrong things about it. i think you would have been better off labeling this as an everyday photo rather than changing the output to B&W and all the sudden becoming a portrait of some kind.

Posted by Tordan on Jul-08-2005 03:08:

quote:
Originally posted by Jem_hadar
ps. I like the earings in the pic -- they grabbed my attention.

That's exactly why the earrings shouldn't be there. I highly doubt d!abolic wanted that to be the focal point. Pick your backgrounds wisely... there seems to be too much going on. This is even more apparent in B&W photos because there isn't enough color for your eyes to distinguish. As Nikitha said, the subject is too close. Zooming out would have made a big difference. Good first attempt though.

Posted by TheNeonAlien on Jul-08-2005 04:41:

I'll buy it for 100,000 bucks

Posted by Pett on Jul-08-2005 07:03:

if first you dont succeed........

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