palm jungle dream(chill out-trance?)last my track

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Posted by linkmage on Jul-20-2005 05:53:

palm jungle dream(chill out-trance?)[updated]

Hello there again

please comment my new updated track...this is I think nostalgic dreamtrance,something maybe wavy,creamy...please let me know if you like or not

linkmage(ptashek)

name of track is dream about palm jungle....

there is the link

http://www.mixposure.com/song.php?songid=12766

Posted by linkmage on Jul-22-2005 15:20:

Enybody enjoyed my track? please write...

Posted by DylanSwe on Jul-22-2005 15:28:

initial thought: it needs more ambience..to flat for a chill out, perhaps they are there but you need to crank them up

this is really not my cup of tea, so Im not a good judge wether this is good music or not...but it sounds good, abit "out there" on that harp(??) but maybe it suppose to be that.

production wise it sounds tight. but sluggish. more elements or raise the ambience sounds and lower the shaker in the more quite places

take care,

Posted by Desty Nova on Jul-22-2005 16:48:

I like the intro, the rest sounds pretty good to me to0.
-Alex

Posted by mark_the_gooner on Jul-22-2005 19:22:

the kick is good and bold, maybe a touch too loud though.
the fx are good.
the track is arranged rather odd, i can't structure it well.
synths are nice, though some of the notes seem out of tune.
the bass is good, but again it seems to go out of tune on one note.

have u followed any specific scale or just picked any notes? it seems out of tune some it (maybe something wrong with me )

Posted by djmill2005 on Jul-23-2005 15:29:

not bad better than mine anyway lol

Posted by Generation X on Jul-23-2005 16:27:

Pretty nice. Doesn't sound like a club hit or anything, but definitely has a nice sound to it (I like the harp usage) and I could see it used in a game or something. Good job...

Posted by Kris Xperiment on Jul-23-2005 17:28:

High Energy

Awesome track, lots of energy, has a ravey touch to it. Very Dark, just my liking!

Posted by ichiro on Jul-23-2005 20:49:

nice tune. The kick and bass are good and deep. There is plenty of atmosphere. the strings are nice. the only concern is that the bass seems to run against or sound out of tune to the melody at certain points. But.. its not really noticable.

good production, would make it on to a chillout album no trouble at all.

Posted by linkmage on Jul-24-2005 13:24:

updated(fixed kick volume),fixed pad...

http://www.mixposure.com/song.php?songid=12766

comment please

Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-25-2005 17:34:

hey!

is it possible to listen to the track from another source?
somehow my computer doesnt want to play the track in the mixposure player and i'm not intended to register over there....

// Lars

Posted by linkmage on Jul-25-2005 19:08:

something wrong with mixposure ....maybe later...you can try my older version....

www.isound.com/mp3s/waves_power

Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-25-2005 19:27:

quote:
Originally posted by linkmage
something wrong with mixposure ....maybe later...you can try my older version....

www.isound.com/mp3s/waves_power

this one works!

bass is cool! deep and clean!
this kind of vocal gives a nice atmosphere...
i'm not a fan of that stuttering pad/synth...
piano is nice, but a bit to loud, imo...
bongos could use a little bit reverb and delay...but just a LITTLE BIT! this mellow around 2.50 and so on has a nice progression...original sound though! sounds like a farting elephant!
i miss something like a structure in the track?!

dont know about the newer version, but with some more work it sounds quite good, altough this genre is not my cup of tea...

Posted by linkmage on Jul-26-2005 08:29:

Link is now working...If somebody wants to listen please visit :

http://www.mixposure.com/song.php?songid=12766

Posted by gowansy on Jul-26-2005 11:48:

i really like yur tune linkimage... the percussion is really nice. nice chillout tune. maybes a little more variation in it?

Posted by mark_the_gooner on Jul-26-2005 13:19:

to follow up my old review...

percussion seems more noticable, really like it.
i really like that wah-ish vocal in the background, really adds to the song.
i think you still have that one note out of tune though, if that was fixed it would be hard to fault this track.

nice easy-listening track.

Posted by kopi_luwak on Jul-26-2005 14:01:

Hey,
I like the background sounds u use, is athmosphere? The bass with the gated choir combo is nice . That plucked sound fits perfectly, I am begining to really enjoy this .
In overall, I really liked your track, I like the jumps from major to minor also, great work .
Kopi =o.

Posted by Takkra on Jul-26-2005 20:42:

wow sounds really great man !!
Ive gotta get used to the melody at first but its cool after listening the song 10 times I really like it!
I'd suggest putting a strong shaker after the brake, to make it more full.. but thats just what Id like to hear ofcourse
keep it up man this has alot potential!

Posted by linkmage on Jul-27-2005 07:26:

Kopi - this is Atmosphere...You have great ears

Thanks for your c0mments...I will create some more percs,where need,and then I 'll post update....

dance till trance

Posted by Sunclyder on Jul-28-2005 08:47:

E-lol

This track is not for me, don't talk to me :unsure:

Sounds & quality are good.

Not bad, but not for me m8!!

Greetiousssssssss

Posted by linkmage on Jul-28-2005 15:21:

Sunclyder>maybe this is for you?

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=281492