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Posted by Drik on Jul-21-2005 22:39:

E:mortal-Released - UPDATED

It's a uplifting melodic trance.

UPDATE:
Right, been rewriting the track. Pretty much everything has been changed and new parts have been �mplemented and old stuff has been removed.

So, let me know if this one is better

http://www.emortal.se/music/emortal-released_dreamer_mix.mp3

Enjoy.

Posted by Aquarian on Jul-22-2005 06:53:

Intro was a bit weird.

Breakdown is really nice. I love the piano thing. What comes after was very unexpected. Somekind of second intro after the breakdown? It's original, but I can't say I like it too much. Though that's just a matter of taste.

Overall production is good.

Posted by Drik on Jul-22-2005 07:17:

Hmm.. maybe I should have it continue after the buildup instead of going to the alternate melody. Will check it out..

Posted by Drik on Jul-22-2005 11:33:

Right, been rewriting the track. Pretty much everything has been changed and new parts have been �mplemented and old stuff has been removed.

So, let me know if this one is better

http://www.emortal.se/music/emortal...dreamer_mix.mp3

Posted by Icone on Jul-22-2005 14:54:

Just heard the original, sounds like a very chilled kind of track. Intro is indeed a bit weird, wouldn't really fit it in the track in my opinion.

Really like the piano, would fit nice in some sort of epic trancer I think! Not much a fan of those squary synths, don't sound too interesting to me.

Overall, I think there are some very nice ideas in the track, just needs a much better structure to make them all shine through. I'd definately go for the piano and create something nice around it.

I'll grab the dreamer mix now

Bye,
Wim

Posted by Drik on Jul-22-2005 15:37:

Cool.

Yeah, I wasnt that satisfied with the first version. Still have some work to do on the dreamer mix with the synthline, needs a tad more variation.. (more filtering, and slower in the first part in the track).

Plus, I've left some empty places where I'll throw in vox later.