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Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-25-2005 14:14:

[Trance] Blank & Jones - Watching The Waves [Klangzentrum's Waves@Sunset Remix] *ud*

hey guys!

i'm back with some new stuff...again a remix, yes i know..
this time my victim was blank & jones - watching the waves...
first i wanted it to be an ambient remix, which can you hear in the intro, but later on, it turned quite trancy...

hope you'll enjoy listening...

7.56min @ 192kbps

Blank & Jones - Watching The Waves [Klangzentrum's Waves@Sunset Remix]

feedback is as always truly appreciated...

// Lars


Posted by linkmage on Jul-25-2005 17:13:

Hello there....

what can I say...amazing...

This track I liked very much(original)....and there you creted a rmx...fantastic ...

I dont like :

hat...to primitive...for this track need like shaker or something
clap(after clap crunchy end)
there are places...where kick with snareroll is overflowing

remix 9.5/10
quality 9.5/10

had pleasure

please review my new dream-chill-trance track

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forum/s...threadid=279860


Posted by -Rokipeer- on Jul-25-2005 21:02:

Just love it...
the beginning is cool (waves)
it greates a feeling that u are somewhere in beach etc.
really nice


Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-26-2005 12:31:

thank you! far too kind!
i'm glad you guys like it!

anyone else wanna have a listen? just do it? comments are welcome!


Posted by mark_the_gooner on Jul-26-2005 13:29:

good intro.
kick is good, bassline is good too, though fatter would be better.
percs are good, and the bongo.
breakdown doesn't have much atmosphere but its still good.
synths are good, but maybe u could do with another pad coming in after the breakdown, to give it more atmosphere.
that snare build-up is a bit overloaded.
there is a nice atmosphere after the second breakdown.

overall 8/10, a nice trance track and barely any faults.

btw, what happened to your Lolo - Why remix? i wanted to hear it but its 404'ed


Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-26-2005 13:38:

thx for the feedback, guys!

i'll probably do a little rework, when i have enough opinions about what to improve!


@ mark: i'll sent you a link this evening via pm! i dont have enough webspace to host all my work, so some of them are just on demand!


Posted by Stino on Jul-26-2005 13:50:

in short: weak remix

Review:

Intro is pretty nice but its just a wave sample, nothing to hard. Kick is weak and ploppy, lacks any power. Snareroll is clipping and sometimes bass and kick are clipping as well. Bassline is extremely simple and so is the sample. All the other sounds are not really coherent. They sound thin and flat and are not inspiring. The main synth on its own is pretty nice but it doesnt fit at all wiht the rest of the track. I actually dont know the original, or i cant remember it but i dont like this remix. Its simplistic and flat for some reason.

Points that need improvement:
- bass/kick
- sounds
- mixdown, watch the volumes, stuff is clipping and give ur sounds more fullness and give the mix down a more coherent feeling.

Stijn


Posted by dannyc on Jul-26-2005 14:04:

man dis is brilliant, maybe best thing i've heard from you get. dont know the original but dis i enjoyed totally.

now you need to stop remixing and writing some original tracks and getting your name outthere cause you've got some skills.


Posted by dannyc on Jul-26-2005 14:07:

stino are you listening to the same tune


Posted by kopi_luwak on Jul-26-2005 14:12:

Weeeeeeeeeeeeee I am in da beach! :P, excellent chill out intro, all is in the right place imo, your kick sounds really good, I would add another drum loop in the background besides the congas to give more fullness to the track but, that's just my opinion .
I dont know the original so I dont know what else I could comment, so far I liked what I have heard , good work man .
Kopi =o.


Posted by DylanSwe on Jul-26-2005 16:10:

Sweet! good original, good remix.

altough there are some clipping issues, especially the snarerolls and sometimes the kick as mentioned.
the pad/saw synth sounds is way to loud and perhaps to much decay or on it..

the beat is kinda weak troughout the track, not that you cant hear it or feel it, but it needs more elements, more percs like mentioned.

otherwise its a quality track, very well produced and layered, just fix some volume/clipping issues and your set!

take care,


Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-26-2005 20:07:

thx for your honest feedback!

i'll have a look at the mentioned points, when i'm reworking the track!

@ stino: sounds very negative, but i'm thankful for your feedback! helps to improve! though its a matter of taste sometimes... hope you'll like the track more when the rework-work is done...

anybody else has wishes, suggestions or comments on the track?


Posted by Stino on Jul-27-2005 11:02:

well i never let my taste influence my reviews, or only a little. All aspects are mentioned are technical and sound wise, like the kick, bass and the clipping. But jeah i can sound very negative in reviews as i only point out the things that need imrpovement .


Posted by Sunclyder on Jul-27-2005 11:47:

WW Klang Not bad

This is very nice remix!! your remix have something special, sounds are quiet good, your vission is better

Cheerriooooooooussssssssss

Greetzky from Poland


Posted by staticblue on Jul-27-2005 11:59:

peaceful relaxed mix , i like this.

i agree with some of the stuff Stino said, aswell


Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-27-2005 17:23:

still thx for the feedback, guys!

going to rework it asap! depends on when i get back home...have to go to army now again...


feedback is still appreciated...


Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-29-2005 19:46:

no one else?!

ok! then it's time to rework, now!


Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-30-2005 16:00:

done a LITTLE rework!

-decreased the amp of the pad
-�ncreased the amp vocal "the"
-worked a bit on the lead sound
-hope to killed to clipping
-worked on bass compression

have fun! feedback is still appreciated...


Posted by .A.Y. on Jul-30-2005 21:21:

awesome intro
i think you should make an ambient version of this..


Posted by mef on Jul-30-2005 23:36:

Hey man. dont thhink i got around to replying to this before. really like the seashore samples and the chill intro

nice synthwork also. yeah good remix i think. nothing more to add really except keep at it

All the best

Martin


Posted by Sheen Trickz on Jul-31-2005 00:43:

loe

nice beggining.. im dreamin with those sounds of sea .. nicely made to be honest i think i liked ur rmx more than orginal :P hehe..i like it...


Visit and comment my 2 tracks too
1. http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=281570
2. http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=278147


Posted by Klangzentrum on Jul-31-2005 09:28:

thx for the comments, guys!
i really appreciate your feedback on my remix!
words like these always encourage me to produce ...


Posted by Romi on Jul-31-2005 09:37:

I like it. Nice kick and melodies are allthough not yours very nice and chill. The overall mix could use a bit more body, that's all i think, the rest is quite good and a pleasure to listen to.


Posted by Ry Diggs on Aug-01-2005 09:45:

Very Nice indeed. Sounds very 1999-2000ish to me. I like it.

True 5am tune IMO


Posted by jaggalo on Aug-05-2005 09:02:

woooooooow what a work ..... of a massive classic .... really amazin work ..... just i hav to say only ... brilliant


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