david.michael- Kineticism [Full 320 kbps] Trance/Tech-trance-ish

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Posted by david.michael on Sep-14-2005 20:12:

david.michael- Kineticism [Full 320 kbps] Trance/Tech-trance-ish

Please leave constructive feedback. Thanks!

http://www.dmichael.org/Music/david..._Kineticism.mp3 Right click, save as...

Artist: david.michael
Title: Kineticism
Length: 6:05 (full)
Filesize: 13.9 MB
Bitrate: 320 kbps
Produced using: FL Studio v4.0, internal plug-ins, V-Station VST

Remixers welcome....

Posted by Mr Rogers on Sep-14-2005 22:07:

not digg'n that clap at all, way to much "attack" on it and its to loud...doesn't blend with the beat.

nice melody...break sounds a bit muddy at first, then opens up nice.
i like the melody a lot, still not digg'n the clap in there.
maybe some epic huge stings in the build.
Kick in is simple but nice....
good track!
that clap is just kill'n it though, especially that double clap u got go'n.
good work!

Posted by punjabi on Sep-15-2005 00:55:

yeah the clap definitely needs work. other than that good track.

Posted by Nomen Nescio on Sep-15-2005 01:01:

I need to agree on the clap Also the kick could be better, I guess it is just a regular fruity kick? You might want to compress it better and then put up the volume a bit as well.

I also want to add that your lead sound is quite original and the notation of that lead as well, only you keep on going with it for way too long without anything extra happening. You could use a nice stringpad going over the lead at a certain point for example.

Overall decent effort!

Posted by david.michael on Sep-15-2005 11:45:

Thanks very much, all... some good advice in here!!

Anyone else?

Posted by david.michael on Sep-15-2005 12:47:

quote:
Also the kick could be better, I guess it is just a regular fruity kick?

Yes, it is a regular Fruity kick... in fact, all of the percussion samples in the song are just built-in Fruity samples. I don't have anything else... any suggestions on where to get good samples welcome. Preferably free or cheap, lol

Posted by open-mind on Sep-15-2005 16:23:

Ok, it seems to be a mastering problem.
The melody is ok, but I don't like the sound you use. Sound too cheap to me.
4:10, he, i like this!
it's ok but i'm not impressed.
6/10

Posted by david.michael on Sep-16-2005 20:23:

quote:
Ok, it seems to be a mastering problem.

What do you think is wrong with the mastering?