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Posted by DJ Dinz on Oct-07-2005 18:04:

altuna - crystal sense (128kbps)

Hi TA trance producersssss...

here is my track...

http://s5.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1...PV160G98RUARN8H

ggimme a feedback.. LOL
im L.O.S.T!

thank you!

cheers!

Posted by staticblue on Oct-07-2005 18:17:

beginning sounding pretty solid, nice percs

nice high-bass coming at 30 seconds, i think the subbass is nice but needs more presence and power to it or just another layer, up to you

darkish stuttery synths coming in the buildup about 2:00 i think it needs a bit more drive, maybe try some additionnal percs layers or something.

main melody is quite anthemic, but simple thats why i think it needs a more massive synth to support it and it will work very well !

definitly my favorite track from you uptill now, cool uplifting parts

Posted by alanzo on Oct-07-2005 18:43:

The composition blows.

Mastering is ok, main lead is too loud and you can't hear the hats.

Posted by DJ Dinz on Oct-07-2005 20:00:

Thanks Jon.. + feedback.. i'll improve it...

n thnx too to alanzo.. its a motivation

cheers!

any more?

Posted by Subtle on Oct-07-2005 20:00:

nice drive, nice synths in the buildup..

breakdown sound ok, synths sounds good, but the melody u got there seems a bit too random for me, i would make the melody more linear, parts of the melody is cool, but the low end of the tracks lacks a bit..

it got good potential..

Posted by DJ Dinz on Oct-07-2005 20:06:

to Subtle.. + feedback again...
yeah i will add some element on the last climax.. thns dude

cheers!

Posted by Aquarian on Oct-07-2005 21:57:

Very much love the kick/bassline. Buildup has a nice, strong feel to it.

I felt that the breakdown should've been a bit more emotive. I'm not saying you should drag it on for days like in alot of productions these days, but just that you have this nice epic melody coming out of nowhere, and it all just seems so sudden.

The melody itself is very nice, but I think I agree with whoever said it needs a thicker, more powerful synth supporting it. Not that the one you have now isn't good.

Overall it's very good, and has alot of energy to it.

By the way, did you ever finish altuna?

Posted by DJ Dinz on Oct-08-2005 05:55:

thnx aquarian..
"but just that you have this nice epic melody coming out of nowhere, and it all just seems so sudden." i think u have the point.. hehe

btw yeah i finished altuna.. it will be release at Trance Tribe soon..

thnx alot man cheers!

Posted by The Drow on Oct-08-2005 09:05:

You should add more bass to this track.
I like the gated synths and the riffs.
I don't like the main melody.
Imo you shouldn't made something that epic in it.
Also, the track is a bit empty for me.
The pads are ok.

You are starting to repeat youself too much.
Change sound presets.

3/5
Omer.

Posted by Aquarian on Oct-08-2005 14:37:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ Dinz btw yeah i finished altuna.. it will be release at Trance Tribe soon..

Ok drop me a pm as soon as it is!

Posted by MrMarcellos on Oct-08-2005 14:44:

this sounds wonderfull.. yeah great stuff...

Posted by Desty Nova on Oct-08-2005 18:18:

quote:
Originally posted by MrMarcellos
this sounds wonderfull.. yeah great stuff...

+1, I liked it too, although you've got lots of epic type stuff going it, still sounds pretty dark to me. You've got some really cool pads and voices in there, too. I'm not really into epic trance much, though I like this darker kind of stuff better.
-Alex

Posted by moeva on Oct-08-2005 18:52:

It's okay. In complete honesty it brings me back to the earlier days of electronic dance music. I don't really like how it's been mixed down, the lead synth is rich in high freqs and seems dead on the other end of the spectrum and as the d00d earlier said you can't hear the hi hats, there is far too much mud going on from 10Khz even up to 20Khz. The bassdrum seems to be missing levels below 100hz, making it sound more plastic than solid. I have a feeling that the mix was far too compressed too. Increasing the final mix's levels all the way up in hopes of getting a warm balance of all freqs isnt really proper mastering. Hope this helps.

Keep them beats coming; your content rocks and I'm sure you're name will be on black plastic as long as you work hard.

all the best of success

Posted by kopi_luwak on Oct-09-2005 19:06:

quote:
Originally posted by staticblue
beginning sounding pretty solid, nice percs

nice high-bass coming at 30 seconds, i think the subbass is nice but needs more presence and power to it or just another layer, up to you

darkish stuttery synths coming in the buildup about 2:00 i think it needs a bit more drive, maybe try some additionnal percs layers or something.

main melody is quite anthemic, but simple thats why i think it needs a more massive synth to support it and it will work very well !

definitly my favorite track from you uptill now, cool uplifting parts

I second static poop :P, very good track mate .
Kopi =o.

Posted by azndragon0613 on Oct-10-2005 03:17:

The bassline sounds pretty cool, has a nice dark feel to it.

Main lead is a bit overpowering.

Good song, energetic and pumping. Just feel a bit thin around the bass area. Perhaps boost the low ends

Posted by DJ Dinz on Oct-11-2005 16:02:

Guys.. thnx again for ur reply...

i think i get my error now.. beside of mastering

-the lead is too loud n the snthy is use is no good.
-Subbass needed
-composition need to be fix..

ok then.. working for it..

Thank You! CHeers!

Posted by isrefel on Oct-11-2005 20:25:

p h a t

really enjoyied ure tune and want you to know that you sound proffessional, the melody and sounds are good and fills. at the end of the day getting that killer melody will happen one day the main thing is the tune has alot of good sounds and they are present and clear

isrefel