[uplifting trance] altuna - denpasar sky

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Posted by DJ Dinz on Nov-14-2005 15:36:

[uplifting trance] altuna - denpasar sky

Hi TA bro n sis.. hehe

This is my new track.. havent finished it.. but this is the heart of da song..

http://s5.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=1...8U1RCA797U14KMX

I call this "Denpasar Sky" another word for "Bali Sky... if u r not clear with the word hehe"

ok then this is a 2min++ sample.. tell me what u think!

THNX !

Posted by staticblue on Nov-14-2005 15:55:

hi mate,

overall i thought the clip was a bit simple, if it's the main part of the song i'd like to hear some pads, some more synth layers behind and other stuff to make it fuller. I like the bassline, pretty groovey and sounding solid but it lacks a bit of presence. Melodies are good, nothing really outsanding though

Posted by Subtle on Nov-14-2005 15:57:

omg, what a superaw, omg...

well, i can easily hear that u made this melody, it got some "good" progressions in it, and then it just goes too high.. and for too long..

the synth is screaming, percussions sounds thrown in, and the bass is little present..

pretty uninspired attempt mate

4/10

Posted by zoric on Nov-14-2005 18:57:

Pretty nice stuff you've got there

Posted by Aquarian on Nov-14-2005 19:06:

I agree with the first two comments. It just doesn't do it for me. Especially after what I've come to expect from your previous productions, it makes this sound amateur-ish. I just finished listening to the sample, and now I'm listening to crystal sense, and there's such a huge contrast in quality.

Posted by djlogik on Nov-14-2005 20:10:

It's pretty good...I like the sounds but I definitely think you could do a little bit different progression to make a better breakdown. Maybe some more percussion throwdowns will help with this. Add some more synth layers like static blue said. Giving your bassline a little more bass to it would be good. It just kinda leaves the mix. It's a good sound and all but it's like you can't even hear it anymore with all the other stuff going on. Good luck

Posted by Stino on Nov-15-2005 16:28:

doesnt sound very good indeed....uninspired as said. A preset supersaw, some basic percs and bassline and the melody is boring .... i like the part after the main melo though, drive is nice and i like the acids in the back going on. But work on the main melo + synth and your perc work

Posted by DJ Dinz on Nov-15-2005 17:09:

Hi Guys

thnx u all for the feedback.. lots of negative feedback.. haha but really appreciate it alot

i think.. i will try to fix till it is possible to be fix.. i thought it was good.. but as Aquarian say.. i can do better than this

cheers lads!

THNX