Youth In Asia: 8 Suns for 7 Kings

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Posted by youthinasia8888 on Nov-25-2005 00:12:

Youth In Asia: 8 Suns for 7 Kings

Hello all! I'm a home studio guy who used to play in a pop band, but my passion has always been electronic music. I've been hammering some stuff out the past few years, and recently have bitten by a trance-like bug.

My main programs are Reaktor 4, Korg Legacy, Psychicmodulations Optik, SOund Forge 6, and Cubase SE.

My latest track is titled

8 Suns for 7 Kings (4.52 mb, 128kps)

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=193802

http://www.electromancer.com/artist.php?id=5426aa2ba2

Thanks for listening and any comments greatly appreciated. I'm always trting to learn ways to improve the sound, structure, and production...THANKS!

ROG

Posted by Mr Rogers on Nov-25-2005 00:19:

theres definetly some major mastering issues, and i don't mean to sound rude but your style is totally outdated in this track. It sounds like something made 10 years ago. I'd would listen to a few sets just to see what the sound of today is, and then try to differentiate your sound from there. Structure wise its not that bad, and you can tell you do have skill, you just have to learn how to release it.
thats my best advice I can add

Posted by youthinasia8888 on Nov-25-2005 00:26:

Thanks Mr. Rogers

I'm not familiar with the term "set." I assume that is a string of trance tracks mixed together.

I do own some trance records, including PVD's latest, and it seems that tracks these days are more vocal and on the verge of being pop tunes. Is that a valid observation? Other tracks that I've listened to are of the hard trance variety with fast, hard basslines.

As far as mastering, what do you think I need to do to improve the sound?

Thanks.

ROg

Posted by youthinasia8888 on Nov-25-2005 01:54:

What are the major mastering issues?

Posted by sterilis on Nov-25-2005 02:00:

it needs mastered but im sure you already no that. it could be good if you added an uplifting melody to take it away from the old style which mr rogers is probably referring too. not bad though.

thanks

Posted by nhibberd on Dec-11-2005 00:12:

I definetely hear you pop influence. Some nice tricks you implemented. But it sound a little too inviting for a 25 yearold Madonna to come and spend some time at your mic. The lead melody reminds me of some old poprock track by Bon Jovi, Europe or someone similar, can't realy place it.

I prefer your other track slightly. But all in all it sounds asif you you got most of your sounds out of a keybourd, not a synthesizer. I'm missing a lot of self-modelled tones.

kind regards

CD

Posted by youthinasia8888 on Dec-11-2005 00:25:

Thanks,

I started doing these type of tracks without really listen to anything new. The last time I did any real composition was over 10 years ago, so maybe I'm taking off from where I left off! But I do appreciate the comments. Back in the day, it was groups like Modern Talking, D-mode, Ken Laszlo, other Euro-disco types.....trance wasn't really even out yet when I was playing in bands. When I started getting back into music, I went with some electronica stuff, but the thing that fascinated me was the 4/4 up tempo beats. The synth sounds probably sound that way because I like the v-analog type horns and pads, but it seems like a lot of psytrans has a lot of organic pads and gated leads and basses. I tried to do some gated leads buy using effects plug-in, but still need to practice at it. Still learning. I de really appreciate the comments.

Posted by The Drow on Dec-11-2005 13:22:

Nice choirs and stuff.
Stop the crashes and stuff.
The kick is weak.
There are some notes that are off-key.
This is much like Ian Van Dahl just without the vocals.
Sorry I don't like it.
There is no athmosphere in it. No feeling.
I can hear that you made pop.

1/10 - for the effort.
Omer.

Posted by technoman on Dec-11-2005 16:50:

Just get the style right.
It sounds like you have the whole thing pieced together well.
I think if you got the latest styles into a track it would be good.