[house/acid] jasonf - crystal (original mix) - link fixed

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Posted by dj jasonF on Nov-30-2005 11:17:

[house/acid] jasonf - crystal (original mix) - link fixed

jasonf - crystal

ok i did this a few months ago for fun and thought to share it and get some feedback. its a groovy / acid / prog w/e house track. im not really happy with its structure and there are still alot of things that can be improved but since i cant produce till i fix the computer, here it is. enjoy and give me some feedback

EDIT:....

EDIT 2: removed it from yousendit to an other host, and updated the link.

jasonf - crystal

Posted by richg101 on Nov-30-2005 12:07:

nice beat.

little panned 'frog croak' sounds are great! it gives the track a real original sound.

not sure of the 'electrical' synths from around the 1;00 mark...

overall id make the track even more 'dub' and get rid of some of those melodies. they give the track a 'cheap sound' in my opinion

i recon the track sounds great around the 7;20 mark. minimal but full.

nice track with cool little original features.

rich

check my thread if you have time

Posted by dj jasonF on Nov-30-2005 12:14:

quote:
Originally posted by richg101

nice track with cool little original features.

thanx mate that was my intention. im prob gonna make another mix and change the main melody, it doesnt really fit the track .
and im gonna make it more.. minimal or something.

Posted by Subtle on Nov-30-2005 12:29:

listening:

good kick, i dig the groove in this one.. nice sounds all over.. got nothing more to say actually.. enjoyed listening to it

Posted by Lakeus on Nov-30-2005 17:44:

Hey!!

Yeah as Subtle said the kick works really well... the groove is allright, the percussions are well done. The sound effects are pretty cool but I think there are too many at the same time. It�s difficult to understand what�s happening in the track. It�s somewhat chaotic... You�ve got an original sound and the beat is really good. The break at around 3:20 starts too suddenly... you should put at least a drum fill before it. Also the structure of the track is not too logic but maybe you intended it that way. Good effort though!

Cheers, Lakeus

Posted by iloop on Nov-30-2005 19:00:

minimal, and once you adjust to the pace of that rythm, it starts to grow on you... like when the bass comes in, but something in me wants some deeep dark bassgroves on top of this... gets a bit boring after a while because the speed of the groove doesn't seem enough to drive the track, but overall I think you did a good job with this experiment.

Posted by dj jasonF on Dec-01-2005 10:43:

@ Lakeus i know what you mean theres a white noise arpegio (not really audible.) maybe it needs abit eqing.

thanx guys

Posted by noreliq on Dec-01-2005 14:44:

what can i say... i LOVE the beat, its never boring very original

but the sound fx do kill the track somewhat....and i cant make out a melody anywhere really.....

but awesome none the less

Posted by noreliq on Dec-01-2005 14:44:

what can i say... i LOVE the beat, its never boring very original

but the sound fx do kill the track somewhat....and i cant make out a melody anywhere really.....

but awesome none the less