[First attempt at Psy] Alpha - Untitled (Sample)

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Posted by [Alpha]Dave on Dec-07-2005 23:33:

[First attempt at Psy] Alpha - Untitled (Sample)

Hello all,
This is a sample of my first attempt at making psy. Is it worth continueing at? Take a listen and tell me what you think!
I started working on it a couple of hours ago..

Alpha - Untitled (Sample)

Cheers!
/David

Posted by Sh!fty on Dec-07-2005 23:43:

sounds really promissing
as a true beatwhore I really like this ^^

Posted by Axolotyl on Dec-08-2005 05:45:

Sounds good for a couple of hours worth of work

The fx are the start are pretty nuts!

Don't suppose you want to share that lead synth patch by any chance? Sounds wicked dude

Posted by Four_On_Four-er on Dec-08-2005 06:29:

Sure does sound awesome...

The introduction is the best part IMO.

MY only complaints:

DEEPER BASS... The other elements need to be seperated better... they all seem to hit the mid-trance frequencies pretty hard. The bass itself would do the track good to be more down there, as opposed to hanging with other things.

Posted by snooky on Dec-08-2005 15:38:

first!

mate this is shit hot psy! hi hat could be a fraction lower. but thats it nice one. vocal sample got me strait away. whana here more!

ps. hav a ganders at my not so good tune @

http://trance-in-ur-head.moonfruit.com/

thanx. snooky

Posted by thoughtlessjex on Dec-08-2005 22:47:

Bleh, soundclick mp3player ftl.

I like the intro best.

When the beat comes in, though, there's something wrong with the bass. I want to say it sounds a bit preset-ishplay around with your oscillators, distortion, cutoff and compression to make the sound a bit deeper, and maybe more grumbly.

Good luck, and keep it up. Can't wait to see where this goes.

Posted by greenskydj on Dec-09-2005 16:18:

It sounds good. Bring us 6 minutes worth!

Posted by Frost-RAVEN on Dec-10-2005 03:13:

If you just bring the bass an octave lower, and hicut it a bit, it be better. much better. I like it, but that bassline is more like a fast synthline then a bassline.

Once you get the bass in the spot of bass, you'll be in be much closer to home/.

Posted by cybernetica on Dec-10-2005 12:46:

commenting as I listen...

Great FX and ambience! Great way to introduce a Psy tune.
That sharp lead sound is just awesome. Maybe a little more delay on it.
Like people mentioned, the bass is really too high, and I agree with tuning it one octave down, thereby you will be able to remove the interferences.
I'm a little unsure about the kick, but it might sound better if you got the bass right
Nice drive and percs then! This could get a really wicked Psy tune. Considering this is your first Psy attempt, it sounds awesome.

Good job, keep it up!

Posted by The Drow on Dec-10-2005 13:54:

Nice intro.
Actaully it has really nice atmosphere.
The bass sounds bad.
The track is too loud, I had to turn down the volume on my speakers.
I like the gated vocals.
The intro is good.
The rest nah.
But I won't give you a grade since it's your first time.
learn from cybernetika

Omer

Posted by [Alpha]Dave on Dec-10-2005 14:25:

Thx alot guys!! I totally agree with the bass! Cause I made this during the night when I was working in my headphones, where the bass sonded pretty phat. But when I played the track in my studiomonitors in the morning, the bass sounded thin as hell
I willl take all your comments so far in concidiration, thx alot guys!

/David