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Posted by JakeC on Dec-27-2005 11:48:

Is This All You Want?

A proggy trance track made using Reason 2.5, its 9:45 in length and 128bpm.

Its the first track on this page...

http://jakec.dmusic.com/

Feedback appreciated!


Posted by Takkra on Dec-27-2005 15:10:

Like the kicks and the bass.. do I hear a little "Till there was you"? kicks and the bass seems to match alot! very nice fx's you got going on though, nice pads, everything sounds so clear.. howd you do that btw niec work on the filter
dont like the piano/bass combo so much.. very till there was you indeed ! I made something like this too! around 7 minutes you bring in a very nice acidlike fx i like it bring it to the front a bit more.. same goes for that high pad..
good outro.
great track man!


Posted by JakeC on Dec-28-2005 14:12:

49 views and only 1 reply....

seems the review and get reviewed thing doesnt work.

Maybe ill add a stupid title or pictures of underage asian girls, then ill get 4 pages of reviews.


Posted by linkmage on Dec-28-2005 14:26:

Hey man!
I don't like your clap at the beginning,I don't like beginnig at all... I don't think that this tune is progressivwe trance,I see there TECHNO elements,like rhytm..I think this is techtrance.about 2:30 when bass starts his harmonic variation,I think he kills mid and freqs,I have the same problem..piano part doesn't fit there,because track is clubby,but...I like a lot this trancy place with piano...you made great work,but I think there is a little bit elements which you could fix...

9.5/10


Posted by djmill2005 on Dec-28-2005 15:19:

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
think i will have 2 go with him that sound like sam sharps tunes a bit well at the start anyway (techtrance)


Posted by Kris Xperiment on Dec-28-2005 15:38:

Arrow Great percs

To be honest i looked in this thread at first. But didn't reply lol.
The beginnign reminds me so much of something Sander van Doorn would make.
Which I absolutely love. Can I put this on my mp3 player?
It's got that awesome tribal sound to it. What I would suggest is more atmospheric effects, little sounds in the background to give it some ambient. As far as percs go you overdid it in the most beautiful way with all the toms. What did you use for that bass line?


Posted by JakeC on Dec-28-2005 17:02:

Re: Great percs

quote:
Originally posted by Kris Xperiment
To be honest i looked in this thread at first. But didn't reply lol.
The beginnign reminds me so much of something Sander van Doorn would make.
Which I absolutely love. Can I put this on my mp3 player?
It's got that awesome tribal sound to it. What I would suggest is more atmospheric effects, little sounds in the background to give it some ambient. As far as percs go you overdid it in the most beautiful way with all the toms. What did you use for that bass line?


You may put it on your MP3...

The bassline is the Subtractor.


Posted by JakeC on Dec-29-2005 01:12:

Anymore for anymore!

if not ill let this thread die!


Posted by Semirk on Jan-04-2006 01:06:

Hey,

Definately has a Till There Was You vibe though I think you know that already. The kicks are good and the bass is also though there could be a bit more variation put into the bass I feel, it does drag on a bit, maybe a bit of detuning/flanger fx on a bar in each of its developing sections just to give it a bit of variation. Hope I havent made what I mean too unclear.

The piano seems a bit odd after the buildup to it, I expected more of a killer riff but personal taste I guess. After the piano has disappeared the track is back in full flow for me and sounding good again, but then it comes back and I'd still prefer the riff idea.

Good track though, got some good structure to it just couple of things that niggle me.


Posted by JakeC on Jan-04-2006 01:12:

quote:
Originally posted by DJ Balti


Thank you


Posted by Xiu on Jan-04-2006 01:15:

Hey JakeC I tried to go to your link for the tune but my bro has put shitty websense on his rig so if it's not too much trouble could you put it here www.yousendit.com so I can take a looksee, cheers!


Posted by JakeC on Jan-04-2006 02:04:

http://s60.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...H63LQ8O9ZLHJLQ9

^ there ya go Xiu!


Posted by Xiu on Jan-04-2006 02:21:

Thx man downloading now! Tell you what I think in a mo....


Posted by Xiu on Jan-04-2006 03:23:

Hi man sorry about the wait. Well I likd your tune on the whole but it should be about 1:30 shorter as it seemed to get a little repetitive. I was hoping for it to grab me but it only mildly touched me which is better than nothing I suppose. I suggest you should make or find a few good quality and funky sounding basslines and through them into the mix? Overall a good effort 7.5/10


Posted by Semirk on Jan-04-2006 09:13:

quote:
Originally posted by JakeC
Thank you


No problem.

If you fancy checking out my tune in the forum, feel free.


Posted by hardbeats100 on Jan-04-2006 09:48:

Dunno ello

i like the tune, for some reason it only played till 1.32, ??
i like the piano bit with the bass, it ads atmosphere, (spell check).
i'll try for it again in a bit. im a big reason fan, i got 3.0, its not that different from 2.5, i've made an overnighter tune as a bit of fun with a few people from the forum, if ypou want next time i'll let you know, nd you can take part, its good. any way if ya get a bita free time check it out@

http://hardbeats100.moonfruit.com/

thanx

happy creating


Posted by djglacial on Jan-04-2006 09:55:

Song is pymp. Would appreciate more of a stereo image to it, if not just to separate the instruments.... come to think of it, is that a mono file that's uploaded?

Could you upload a stereo file?

Aside from that,

I like the beggining; perhaps a heavy bass-rich 'verb would be cool till some more instruments kick in, just to add interest. Otherwise I like the track and would add it to my playlist, if the file were stereo.

[edit]

Yo, I disagree with Xiu. I would make the piano more human maybe (ie imperfect timing, more up/down flow in velocity perhaps) but I think the piano kills the buildup perfectly. Add a killer repetative climax (like you did) and you have a perfect late night trance song.

All in all I like it. I won't give it a rating, because I don't believe they're productive, but it's a good track and there is little to nothing I would change about it, save personal preferences.



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