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Posted by Dyslexia on Jan-15-2006 19:14:

Ghost Smilie [Progressive] Dyslexia - Butterfly in a Stomach

Here is the link, which will be available till next saturday 21-01-2006:

http://s22.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...1S1R9HBH94DRCEW

Put marks from 1 to 10.

I'm looking forward for any suggestions/opinions/questions as well.

Thanks.


Posted by Drik on Jan-15-2006 20:13:

Niice, some cool stuff here
I can hear right off the beat that you've been doing this for a while. Very nice intro with good selection of sounds. Hardware synths?

Loving the thing you enter at 1:25, very groovy and does a lot to enhance the coolness of this track. What is that sound anyways?
Pro percussion at work here

Nice short break at 2 min then back into the groove. Sounds a bit wierd at 2:36, not wrong though, but wierd, and its a good thing in this case. Maybe even crank up the volume for those background sounds? Very nice break at 3 min. Very mysterious and good.

Nice track, will work very well on the dancefloor I think.

This isn't my cup of tea in trance but I enjoyed it nevertheless. It would make a nice soundtrack for movie/commercial as well I think.

8/10


Posted by Dyslexia on Jan-15-2006 21:49:

Thanks a lot for your comment on my track.


Posted by Speactra on Jan-15-2006 22:03:

I love the mystic atmosphere you've got here.
The kick sounds great!
Mixing is well done, though I don't like the outro.
I like your drums.
Listen to 3:32, my headphones did'nt like that
I don't like the pitch change on the bass you make at for example 2:29,
but thats me.
What is this track's full name?

I give it 8/10!

Keep it up!

//Alexander


Posted by Dyslexia on Jan-15-2006 22:23:

Thanks for the comment. I'll remove the pitch and work out the 3:32 problem. As concerns the name, i haven't decided yet.


Posted by Speactra on Jan-15-2006 23:04:

You don't have to remove it, maybe somone else likes it
But you could find some better notes for it at that place...


Posted by Dyslexia on Jan-16-2006 14:05:

Actually i was thinking about removing it before, or at least changing it, but at the other hand without it track will sound even more boring


Posted by thoughtlessjex on Jan-18-2006 17:09:

I personally kinda like the way the bass changes. Ir really contributes to the darker sound of this song.

The sounds in this tune are excellent. A lot of ambience. Excellent focus on rhythm and groove.

Yeh, Speactra's right about 3:32. There's a bit of clipping there.

Good stuff. I like this one a lot.


Posted by Dyslexia on Jan-18-2006 20:46:

Thank You for your feedback.
As soon I'll finish this track, i'll make it a littel bit faster, more driving.


Posted by Dyslexia on Feb-11-2006 16:48:

Dead Guitarist Edit:
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=324021



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