[Vocal/Uplifting] Altuna - ??? (Sample 320Kbps)

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Posted by DJ Dinz on Jan-26-2006 18:54:

[Vocal/Uplifting] Altuna - ??? (Sample 320Kbps)

Hi Guys,

This is my latest track.. which i spent 2hours on it yesterday...
I had planned to add vocal in it.. but before that.. i need to make sure that the melody n stuff r cool enough...

so need feedback! LOL

CLICK HERE

NEW VERSION

PS: Positive & Negative feedback warmly welcome here!

Cheers & thanks to all of you!

Posted by Kuffdam on Jan-26-2006 18:59:

Got this little promo sent to me today....

Great track, I would playlist this for sure

Send me the full version when you have it

Cheers

Kuffdam

Posted by The Drow on Jan-26-2006 19:40:

Nice riff at the start.
You need a top layer bass.
The pad is nice.
I like the gated white noise.
I like the lead.
Vocals will defenitly fit in there.
Would you like me to try to write the lyrics.
Nice arp, very 99',it works but it's very unoriginal. Try to add something else on top of it. Except the pluck I mean.
Maybe some squares like in Altuna?
I think you are improving.
You need more percs in the track.
The arp is too loud. Way too loud.
Cool track, I would remix it if you'll finish it.

Omer.

Posted by DjDefected on Jan-26-2006 22:29:

Pretty good track mate. like the melody percussion is good. Keep up the good work

Posted by kopi_luwak on Jan-27-2006 20:01:

quote:
Originally posted by The Drow
Nice riff at the start.
You need a top layer bass.
The pad is nice.
I like the gated white noise.
I like the lead.
Vocals will defenitly fit in there.
Would you like me to try to write the lyrics.
Nice arp, very 99',it works but it's very unoriginal. Try to add something else on top of it. Except the pluck I mean.
Maybe some squares like in Altuna?
I think you are improving.
You need more percs in the track.
The arp is too loud. Way too loud.
Cool track, I would remix it if you'll finish it.

Omer.

I concur, but sounds very cool man .
Kopi =o.

Posted by Mycron on Jan-27-2006 20:33:

the lead sounds like flutlicht,

very nice work mate!

looking forward to hear the final version!

cheers,

Peter

Posted by DJ Dinz on Jan-28-2006 10:21:

Halo Guys...

Thnx for the reply n feedback

i will finish it.. n add vocal with it

cheers!

Posted by DJ Dinz on Jan-28-2006 10:33:

Posted by alanzo on Jan-29-2006 06:09:

Composition sucks... other than that, it's pretty horrible. Very stereotypical/predictable/it's been done 1000x over.

Keep trying, you'll get it eventually

Posted by Aesthetic on Jan-29-2006 22:29:

Had a quick listen last night. Not a bad effort there man.. the style is a bit typical and I think the chords don't really "hit it". Perhaps theres not enough happening I don't know but the tune seems kind of dated. Its a bit predictable.

Nevermind what the asshole above me said, he broke up with his boyfriend yesterday :/.

Posted by Aquarian on Jan-29-2006 23:56:

Percs were very nice. I found that the pad sounded pretty thin or too simple at first. Would be nice with some extra layers - maybe one with stereo panning. Excellent sounds all around. Lots of drive and energy. I like. Melody isn't bad, but I think I prefered your previous ones (altuna, crystal sense).

Posted by azndragon0613 on Jan-30-2006 03:03:

The bass needs a bit more drive. Sounds kind of subdued. The pads are nice and full. I like. The main lead is crazy here. Melody sounds fantastic. Vocals will definitely fit nicely here. Good work mate.

Posted by EtherealSL on Jan-30-2006 05:25:

quote:
Originally posted by Mycron
the lead sounds like flutlicht,

very keen observation.

the intro needs some more build in it, imo, breakdown is nice... would be cool if there were some more elements in it. mainsection is sounding a bit empty. this song sounds good without vocals, i would leave it as it is and rather, work on some of the mastering.

good luck

Posted by The Drow on Jan-30-2006 15:12:

quote:
Originally posted by DaveBegic
Had a quick listen last night. Not a bad effort there man.. the style is a bit typical and I think the chords don't really "hit it". Perhaps theres not enough happening I don't know but the tune seems kind of dated. Its a bit predictable.

Nevermind what the asshole above me said, he broke up with his boyfriend yesterday :/.

nah he's always like that.
He's as twice as arrogant as I am.
And I'm wayyy out of your leauge

Posted by Aesthetic on Jan-30-2006 22:18:

Way out of my league? Well I'm not homosexual, but thanks for the offer anyway.

Posted by Bassaka on Jan-30-2006 22:59:

Listening.

-Beautiful percs and FX in the beggining. Very powerful.

-Gorgeous synth at the beggining too. I'm liking the build up of percs.

-Great break.

-Definate beauty within the strings.

-And the FX that comes in, is beautiful.

-Your melodies, just make me want to find the nearest object, and hump it.(wtf! lol)

-The fullness of the track at around 3:10 whenever it comes in. Is perfect, and the ride fits the style well. Good job!

Loving this song bro!

9/10!

Be sure to check out Midnight Heights!

-William

Posted by The Drow on Jan-31-2006 05:16:

quote:
Originally posted by DaveBegic
Way out of my league? Well I'm not homosexual, but thanks for the offer anyway.

not that league... the arrogance leauge.

Posted by funkysouls on Jan-31-2006 07:35:

wow... gr8 choon.!
some vocals in it would be gr8.

Posted by DJ Dinz on Jan-31-2006 09:36:

Hi guys

Thanks to all again.. really got alot of feedbacks here..

i will modify it more again

cheers!

Posted by richg101 on Jan-31-2006 11:09:

wicked drive from all the elements at the start. really dancy!

break ; string melody doesnt quite have enough emotion. not sure why... plucked melody is nice.

main lead melody is nice . maybe a different synth tho... something more original.

i think the lead is a little closed and needs more highs. it eats up a little too much headroom. and that massive drive at the beginning gets lost somewhere..

i recon mix down again and do a little mastering and it will work better.

with the right levels and some little alterations i think the track will work really well. oh and vocals like female cries would work a treat!

rich

Posted by Pete_B on Feb-01-2006 00:46:

Ok its not a bad little track this. I think the main things it needs would be more reverb on the strings (before the breakdown) and a little bass rework. Could try closing the filter a little and adding a new layer to fill up the bottom end / low mids.

Not bad dude, not too bad at all

Posted by DJ Dinz on Apr-18-2006 14:48:

so how is it again? LOL

PS: sorry i takes a long time just to fix it

hehe

cheers!