Kate Leasing - Neverland (Chris N remix) 128k [sample]

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Posted by Chris N on Feb-06-2006 23:43:

Kate Leasing - Neverland (Chris N remix) 128k [sample]

Well, I am pretty new to making songs but a week ago I really
decided to start since I have always wanted to create stuff.
I started out with Dance eJay years ago but that was it. And now I
am currently working in Reason 3.0 and I love the program.

The thing that made me want to do this was a competition where you
had to create a remix of a song. The only thing you got was the
vocals, and since I liked them I started working.

http://s50.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...YG2V3737PZTGO43

This is just a sample, and if you could please point out
anything that sounds odd and such I would love to hear it. Bring
the criticism on since I really want to improve.

I am sorry about the "ftp" but I have nowhere else to upload it.

That's it for now, over and out

Posted by Chris N on Feb-08-2006 11:30:

Anyone at all?

Posted by DJ LEAD on Feb-08-2006 15:13:

It's too short man :|

Posted by thoughtlessjex on Feb-09-2006 02:24:

Unless you are pending a record deal, please make your sample at least 2 minutes long. (It says so here.)

But before you do, don't remix this song. Remix a song that doesn't have such cheesy vocals. Those first words actually hurt my ears. No offense to you, though. That horrendous vocal is not your fault. Once you have a track with an acceptable vocal, or if you have an original work, then post it here.

Some notes on what you have so far:

1. Kick is too quiet. This actually needs to be the loudest thing in the song, simply put.

2. Bass is... not there. Or it's too quiet. Bass should be among the louder sounds in the mix. Not as loud as the kick, though.

3. Percussion need to be more complex and maybe a might bit louder.

That's about all I can think of off the top of my head. But for some more details on what you'll want to look for, check out this thread in the Production Studio. Hang out in the PS, too. You can learn a lot there.

Sorry to be harsh, but those vocals are just egregious.

Posted by Chris N on Feb-09-2006 10:59:

Thanks thoughtlessjex, I might decide to just skip the vocals and
go for a tune of my own. I will do changes according to what you said as well. And you know, harsh is the only way to go ;D

Thanks.