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Posted by Rayan on Feb-11-2006 22:12:

Exclamation My best song maybe.. Check out! everything is new...

Hi!! This one of the few songs I put so much work in! I use whole 2 days one this song. And I moust say that its worth to download. if you like my other stuff/music!

All samples are new. I did make a whole new track with alots of new cool stuff. made new bass, new sounds & beat. The mid-bass line is very cool. because its the first time i heard one that goes like this.


Very Emotional, nice break & with a kick ass melodie (who I play with a oboe)

The one thing I think its very bad on this song, is the mastering. But. Lett e hear what you think of that! It sound very good to me! and is the oboe a little to high on the volume?

And by the way. please leave some comments. because I need it!

song is off net!


Posted by Rinster on Feb-11-2006 22:36:

WOW! im speachless... kick-ass song! i love the melody at 5:20. really your best tune. mastering imo is perfect.

Ryan please check your pm box


Posted by kopi_luwak on Feb-11-2006 22:42:

14 minutes lol ........
Listening, skiping at parts because I dont have 14 minutes atm .
Intro, kinda generic, the break is pretentious imo, but after the oboe ends I really like all, the piano in the background and the distorted synth, all works very sweet.
Overall, nice tune, I would fix the highs because the hats are a bit earpercing imo, and would use a better oboe sample, but that's my personal taste, nice tune .
Kopi =o.


Posted by Rayan on Feb-11-2006 22:50:

hehe.. thanks! yeah. The highs is one thing that I always do wrong.. ARGH!
But.. to the oboe, its the best I got for now! if I want a better one I need to go and buy GPO. and that shit cost me alots of money. But. We will see what the future take me.

and for the 14 min. its because I dont have done a thing with it. I want comments first.

thanks again!


Posted by washout on Feb-11-2006 23:31:

did u skip class for this too ??


Posted by Rayan on Feb-11-2006 23:33:

no.. hehe! How?


Posted by washout on Feb-11-2006 23:37:

got the shit going now.
liking it so far.


Posted by Rayan on Feb-12-2006 00:01:

thanks. tell me what you think after listenig then


Posted by washout on Feb-12-2006 00:03:

im playing jo online right now.
i got your tune on my playlist by itself.
so in an hour im either gonna love it or hate it.
do me a favor and find me a new game demo. ty. lol.


Posted by covert23 on Feb-12-2006 01:03:

Evil1 nice

but what the highs and keep an eye on the bottom end.....
keep it up mate....


Posted by Dj Cola on Feb-12-2006 10:51:

intro is nice... its harder then your other tunes i think! .

that oboe doesnt really "go with the flow" in this tune, high ends .

*everyone picks on the oboe*

the main lead is nice as hell, but that thing in the outro (that fx i think... with a kick, *boom* is quite ugly .

otherwise Great tune.

have you added low ends to your bass?


Posted by Rayan on Feb-12-2006 10:54:

hehe... uploade a new one soon! Get the high ends away! :P

and no. I think the oboe fit where well hehe

no. not added low ends


Posted by Dj Cola on Feb-12-2006 11:14:

add low endz! ^^, they rock .

i would like to listen to the v. without highs

omg i added gollum vocals to my track >.<


Posted by staticblue on Feb-12-2006 11:25:

Hey Ryan,

the mixing in this one is better than in your last track IMO, sounding pretty solid I think your percs are too "excited" or have too much highs.
The basslines and pads are sounding good here, the hibass pattern is interesting but it creates a bit of a "phase" when the subbass comes in. It's not due to the sound, just the pattern i think.

The oboe sequence is very nice, i think i had already heard it in a clip from you. Good job on the breakdown !

Overall the track is a good one, not the style i like most at the moment but definitly a nice work.


Posted by Dj Cola on Feb-12-2006 11:50:

oooh a review from the great static blue

i just poster to tell you that your track is good stuff... again


Posted by Rayan on Feb-12-2006 13:53:

thanks Jon (Static)
and thanks Cola! yeah, a little to much highs! But you learn by doing wrong :P


Posted by Dj Cola on Feb-12-2006 15:12:

tell me about it i used fruity samples for 4 months before someone told me they suck badly


Posted by funkysouls on Feb-12-2006 15:49:

i m makin a collection of ur choons brother.
excellent work


Posted by Rayan on Feb-12-2006 17:44:

ehe!

thats funny to hear, and great to!


Posted by Rinster on Feb-12-2006 17:46:

quote:
Originally posted by funkysouls
i m makin a collection of ur choons brother.
excellent work


lol thats exactly what im doing to, im only missing fantasy part 1...
ryan could you please give a link? cheers mate


Posted by iloop on Feb-12-2006 22:19:

i really like the 1st bassline in this, unusual and originality pay off. Thought the track seems a little static for a while as compared to some of your more energetic tracks. The same melodic line hangs for over 2min...The break has some nice elements and after about 50 seconds of a long break before the oboe im now thinking this is more chillout trance which is nice to see from you. The oboe I think is great. the melody is awesome...thought i'd love to see that oboe melody go up the scale a bit more just prefrence. Main melody coming in now and it follows the chill kind of atmophere you have going here. The oboe overpowers the main synthline melody and i think they could be balanced a bit better... Personaly i think if you cut this track down to around 9min and introduce new elements a bit quicker and with more drive the track would be a bit better. Though as always you have great elements in your tracks that stand out above the amateur level onto an originality of your own. Keep up the great work.


Posted by globalwarming on Feb-12-2006 23:55:

very nice man!
i agree about the low frequancy... you should work more on your bassdrum, make is clearer and punchy. (i think best would fit an above & beyond kick).

good luck


Posted by iloop on Feb-13-2006 00:51:

quote:
Originally posted by globalwarming
very nice man!
i agree about the low frequancy... you should work more on your bassdrum, make is clearer and punchy. (i think best would fit an above & beyond kick).

good luck


do you have an idea where one might find an Above and beyond kick?


Posted by globalwarming on Feb-13-2006 01:10:

http://s24.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...A93UY1XE6751CBK

here you go mate


Posted by Rayan on Feb-13-2006 07:35:

hm. Thank you for great reviews and. I got those samples


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