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Posted by eLe_vatE on Jan-19-2002 23:57:

My First Production

OK, I've had fruity loops for 4 days and I finished my first track, it's 6:24 in length (128 kbs)
Download Here
**Left Click and rename to *.mp3 (sorry for the hassel)**

....Maximum thanks to Project T for assisting me with all this anti-leech stuff, I'm not so great with this stuff you see

It's my first time so go easy on me Please tell me what I'm doing wrong and how I can improve

Thanx
Chris

Posted by DJ Libor on Jan-20-2002 00:04:

trust me that is an amazing tune (especially since u only had the software like 4dayz!!!!!!!)

u need 2 do more if u r like this now who knows what u could b?

i mean it this is your 1st time then u could b big then next ferry? watch out all u producers we got this guy (well in a yr or something)

Posted by eLe_vatE on Jan-20-2002 00:26:

hehe so I got the seal of approval from a good mate, what do others think?

Posted by dbl on Jan-20-2002 09:38:

is this the first time you have made a song or is it just the first time you used frityloops?

if it's the firts time you make music it's really good...
i think you could have changed the strings a little... don't like it to much... i mean the strings.

Posted by netroM on Jan-20-2002 09:59:

that antilink thing suxx!
can't d/l a shit from there

Posted by itsamemario on Jan-20-2002 14:53:

whats up with those antileech shit anyways? i dont get that.. and wtf is bumping?

Posted by SmellsExcellent on Jan-21-2002 06:38:

anti-leech is bullshit.. ill tell ya what i think when i get the song in a few days at around 234b/s... SHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEt

-Marc

Posted by Dave_Masters on Jan-21-2002 11:02:

Ok heres my constructive critisism

1. The start...... well, it sounds like a typical E-jay Production, the choice of kick doesnt help, that kick on it own doesnt sound to good, i suggest adding a bit of percussion from the start.
2. Maybe you should try and create a more complicated bass line, cos again it does sound like a Ejay Production.
3. from 1.20 to about 2.50, it basically does the same thing. I think adding sound effects would improve the production, just little background noises...And the adding of further percussion at "cue" points.

4. After a while that synth kinda gets annoying

and finaly

5. Im no expert in producing by anymeans, these are just things that i think could improve the track. By all means download my second production (a thread found further down in this forum)and critise it! I hope i have helped anyway.

Regards

Posted by eLe_vatE on Jan-21-2002 17:03:

Thanks for the input dbl & Dave C, I'll take that on board and try to improve on my next production

Posted by SmellsExcellent on Jan-21-2002 20:21:

not not melodies and such, but the drums suck.

Also, you need to layer up the different sounds. For example, take the pinaoroll from "riff A" and paste it into a few other diffferent generators such as SimSynth or maybe even a smaple. Anything you try can usually make the sound better and more interesting.

Try to work with the FX as well. Theres no reeverb or anything (at least thats how it sounds) on your channels. That helps a ton!

Juts hack (fuck around with, hack is a MN thing) FL for a while and youll get the hang of it.

Keep up the good work, really, it sounds good for 4 days of FL.

Cheers
-Marc

Posted by eLe_vatE on Jan-22-2002 23:24:

Thanks for the ideas Marc , sorry about the slow download, but soon I will be getting an mp3.com page with Project T (LiQuiD PuLsaR)....watch this space so things should hopefully improve

Posted by Peter Campbell on Jan-29-2002 09:12:

good work for only 4 days with fruityloops eLe_vatE, your melodys are nice and trancy. You need to work on a better song progression format, the start was really empty
keep up the good wrok

Posted by Evil Teef on Jan-30-2002 05:23:

dam it i cant download it