dbl - Ocean of Life (comments please)

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Posted by dbl on Jan-21-2002 00:02:

dbl - Ocean of Life (comments please)

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don't have much to say about it, but what do you think of it?

i can fix a .flp file if someone want to remix it
just tell me

Posted by SmellsExcellent on Jan-21-2002 06:32:

hey, thats a great tune! I really like it. Keep up the good work!

-Marc

Posted by dbl on Jan-21-2002 07:55:

thank's

any more comments?

Posted by Icone on Jan-21-2002 08:58:

ok!

i'm off to download it
i'll give opinions later when it's here

can u check out my track beyond the stars too?
your remix will be on our new page soon, we'll post it when it's there
btw we might need a 128 kbps version of your remix, because mp3.com doesn't accept the higher quality versions.

kind regards, Wim @ LW

Posted by DoubleDiagnosis on Jan-21-2002 14:08:

Sounds most times pretty nice. Track starts nice so it has your attention directly.
Point of critism is the part that starts around 2:00 could be better worked out sometimes that "Big" bang comes to often and to quick behind eachother and the changeover around 3:18 could be better I think but that's my objective opinion.
Be still nice worked out track that deserves a download

Double Out

Posted by dbl on Jan-21-2002 14:16:

thanks for the comments.

I will make a 128 kbps version when i'm using my other computer lightworks..

and i think i downloaded your track on my other computer lightworks, but i forgott to comment it...
well... i download it one's more on this computer.. a comment comes soon

Posted by mantisnl on Jan-21-2002 15:20:

dll it now m8

Posted by Icone on Jan-21-2002 16:25:

mauro picotto influenced :)

hey dbl, as promised my honest opinions

i think it's a track with lots of variety in it, which is good.
the intro is very melodic, but then at the 2-3 min mark the song changes into a somewhat picotto style track (maybe the change could be better worked out somehow... but that's my opinion ).
the percussion is great, that's what reminded me of our good friend mauro. it's got the typical mauro picotto structure too, melodic at times and then suddenly leave the melodic thing and start with hard beats and lots of snares and percussion.

a good job, but a bit more work on the changes and it'd be perfect
best greetz, Wim @ LW

Posted by dbl on Jan-21-2002 16:34:

thank's lihtworks...

so you like the picotto style thing when it leaves the melodie or what?

if you don't i maybe could try keep the melodie in someway when the drums start...

thank's again

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-21-2002 18:14:

hey i like it except some breaks (the famous 2.00)
id like to remix plz upload flp
nice work

Posted by dbl on Jan-21-2002 18:20:

what is the famous 2.00?

anyway... i can put up the .flp file tomorrow.. maybe today, but i don't think so...

Posted by _Marco_ on Jan-21-2002 18:28:

i was talking about the second minute
ok cya tomorrow
great drums
bye

Posted by Icone on Jan-21-2002 18:37:

yeah the picotto style is fine, like the different take on trance.
but maybe change the way the song switches to that kind of ply a bit more... like a nice transition to it.

anyways it's got great drums like marco v said

Posted by dbl on Jan-21-2002 22:39:

good, caus i liked it 2.