I wrote this about 15 minutes ago...

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Posted by infinity HiGH on Jan-29-2002 04:07:

I wrote this about 15 minutes ago...

I was at a completely different board, boards.ign.com and someone posted a topic "What colour is the sky in your world?" Typical spam, but, being the trancEaddict that I am, I had to come up with something a litte "different" and not just reply with "blue". Here it is...tell me what you think;

The Blue Sky hovers above me, I see a Shining Star just before it Melts Into The Ocean. Hanging in the sky, motionless, is the Clear Blue Moon with a Violet Stream orbiting around it. Under my feet, lies Black Snow that has fallen from Outer Space. I feel my Lost Emotions Drifting Away, like Angel Dust. I am in a Universal Nation, with Seven Cities Above The Sky, the Wavebells ringing around me, creating a Cosmic Vibe. I am...in a TRANCE.

Improve it if you feel the need...I wrote it in about 15 minutes...while dead tired from work. A friend helped with one line...the Seven Cities Above The Sky one..

Posted by djSlain on Jan-29-2002 04:12:

that's a nifty piece ya got there. finally an original post

Posted by capricorn15 on Jan-29-2002 04:29:

haha dope, i used to write stories in my aim info with trance songs in them, thats pretty sweet

Posted by infinity HiGH on Jan-29-2002 04:33:

Thanks...both of ya

I didn't know if I should post this here...but, heh, getting a positive response

Posted by eXeTik on Jan-29-2002 04:47:

Pfft, nice combinaton man... that truly represents Trance (and im not relaying only to the words, but to the whole agenda )

Posted by Mark on Jan-29-2002 06:23:

Re: I wrote this about 15 minutes ago...

quote:
Originally posted by infinity HiGH
I was at a completely different board, boards.ign.com and someone posted a topic "What colour is the sky in your world?" Typical spam, but, being the trancEaddict that I am, I had to come up with something a litte "different" and not just reply with "blue". Here it is...tell me what you think;

The Blue Sky hovers above me, I see a Shining Star just before it Melts Into The Ocean. Hanging in the sky, motionless, is the Clear Blue Moon with a Violet Stream orbiting around it. Under my feet, lies Black Snow that has fallen from Outer Space. I feel my Lost Emotions Drifting Away, like Angel Dust. I am in a Universal Nation, with Seven Cities Above The Sky, the Wavebells ringing around me, creating a Cosmic Vibe. I am...in a TRANCE.

Improve it if you feel the need...I wrote it in about 15 minutes...while dead tired from work. A friend helped with one line...the Seven Cities Above The Sky one..

wow thats really neat. you should make that your signature or something cuz its so cool.

Posted by dOgMa55 on Jan-29-2002 06:29:

That my friend, is absolutely beautiful. Im saving that line for future reference. I promise i won't claim i wrote it
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Posted by Slapskin on Jan-29-2002 06:43:

nice piece of poetry there d00d. i see a shakespeare replication in you

Posted by wookieslut on Jan-29-2002 07:50:

'melts into the ocean'.....uh thats freaking awesome!

Posted by Hell_Copter on Jan-29-2002 13:36:

that's really nice m8
if that's what u r writing after u r tired from work
i can just imagine what u'd write when u r wide awake

Posted by tranceaddict991 on Jan-29-2002 13:50:

nice use of all those classic anthems

Posted by barryfigiel on Jan-29-2002 13:51:

That's quite good actually... made me smile anyway!

lateRZ,

barryfigiel

Posted by infinity HiGH on Jan-29-2002 15:32:

Thanks for all the compliments...really put a smile on my face, which is great, cause lately my life has being getting shittier and shittier...and depression has gotten the better of me

Thanks

Posted by SmellsExcellent on Jan-29-2002 15:36:

one word: beautiful.