my newest track (inspired by Rank 1, Ron van den Beuken & Signum)

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Posted by Trancevision on Apr-15-2006 15:24:

my newest track (inspired by Rank 1, Ron van den Beuken & Signum)

EDIT:

This thread is over nine months old now, but there very fascinating news.

My production partner and me got this track signed to
Maximal Recordings and we also got a Tillmann Uhrmacher Remix
of the track MINDSOUNDSCAPES - Evangelion.

see details on this website
http://www.sa-uk.com/

It will be published in February.

The links of the download have been removed but I hope to upload a sample of this track within in the next days with the permission of all the involved people.

Trancevision aka MINDSOUNDSCAPES

Posted by Trancevision on Apr-16-2006 09:55:

feedback anyone=?

Posted by Rinster on Apr-16-2006 11:04:

patience is the key to succes my friend

the link doesnt work for me, could you upload it somewhere else?

thanks.

Posted by Nemesis44 on Apr-16-2006 11:07:

Same here, would like to hear it though.

Cheers
Nem

Posted by Trancevision on Apr-16-2006 12:56:

Mirror added, link 1 works too, just scroll down a little bit.

Posted by Rinster on Apr-16-2006 13:02:

writing as i speak.. the congo's go wel with the kick. 0:58 good introducing of bassline. good short break at 1:25. the break at 3:30 is really good, i love the emotion.. left to right synths are cool. really good layering of samples, the emotion in this track is very nice, i like this one. good job mate!

Posted by Klangzentrum on Apr-16-2006 13:06:

much better now!

nice percs in the beginning!
this clap is a bit out of mix, imo! doesnt sound too good! try to cut out some freqs....
bass is a bit too loud imo...eleminates the other elements a bit...
that belly sound is cool...
nice pads! they're great...
4.08 is awesome!
ideas in the break are really good!
melody has a very lovely progression!
work also a bit on the eq'ing, imo some parts are clipping...try lower the volume of the track...
with some more work on the mixing this is a really good trancer!

keep up the good work!

// Lars

Posted by DJDoubleView on Apr-16-2006 13:21:

you know, it's actually getting kinda boring.

allways great productions, so where's the fun in that? *g

i like the percussions in the beginning. the bassline goes well with the rest of the groove.
overall great energetic buildup and i looooooove the break.
the title serves the melody very well and i get this strange "i wanna die because i've been to paradise"-feeling

mastering is (as always) perfect and well done.

the only thing i would critisize are your snare fills. they sound really standard. if you would do something a little more "you", they would uprade your track to 100%.

i really hope you'll send this to a few labels, cause this is an excelent piece of music!

ps: how about a john miller hardgroove remix?

pps: i would be happy to make a few snarefills for you, if you like.

Posted by Nemesis44 on Apr-16-2006 14:08:

Good track.

Just something in the levels doesn't sit right with me.
Bass might just be a touch too much in the front of the mix, but it might just be me. Works better into the track.

The width of the track leaves something to be desired as it sounds very crammed into the middle, so perhaps think about some hard panning or stereo widening on some elements in the mix.

The percussion is it's biggest weakness as you have a sound that has some real driving potential but is totally wasted due to the very standard percs, so nothing really drives it along. It makes it a very static piece of music with no funk or life.
EDIT- Just gave it a second listen and deffinately the percs and levels, it just gets lost in this wall of sound.

I think with a bit of work though this could become an awsome piece of music, and would definately get my thumbs up.

You have some really awesome ideas, I just feel that it's let down a little by some of the elements I mentioned.

I hope I haven't made myself a retard now. Just calling it how I see it.

Keep it going.

Cheers
Nem

Posted by Trancevision on Apr-17-2006 10:11:

thank you very much for the feedback.

I guess I'll have to work on the bassline and the overall mixdwon.

Posted by Nik Novo on Apr-17-2006 16:33:

Nice track, kinda reminded me a bit of Crystal Invitation

I think the limiter is a bit too hard, you can hear that after the first snareroll at about 1 min. Personally i don't like the bassdrum too much, it's too weak for my taste and it seems to go under with all the synthesizers playing - maybe you should try to EQ and turn it up a bit or take a more powerful BD

Alltogether the sound is very "high", meaning you have very little sounds in the low frequency area... this takes the drive a bit. Maybe you should try to put the bassline one octave down.

I hope the fadeout at the end is just in this version as it doesn't make the track quite mixable

Posted by Trancevision on Apr-18-2006 15:56:

thank you very much for all the feedback.
I really appreciate that.

There are several things which need to be improved.

Posted by djads on Apr-19-2006 10:21:

well what can i say ? its a very good work, and yes the bassline may be a bit to loud, but nothing you cant fix in seconds . As i said very good work , keep it up ! ITWT.

LG

//Alex

Posted by Effero on Apr-19-2006 14:51:

Love the kick and colour of the whole mix, deep but clear and present....awesome. I don't like the snare rolls, too old school like. The drive of the whole thing is very good, all the elements are interacting and the mix seems full.
Break is eerie, very nice, great lead....those types of leads are my favourite, pure trance experience. The intro to the chorus is energetic...get rid ot the snare rolls.
Progression in the chorus is good, a bit standard but still captures my attention.
All in all, good work, standard trance, requires minor changes to sound up to par with current releases...
Effero

Posted by Dj Cola on Apr-19-2006 14:54:

i dont think this track is to bad, actually is really good but you could use some more bass or atleast lower frequencys!

i like the driving synth!

the break is nice!

good work on this track, brass and stuff!

Posted by Xac_t on Apr-19-2006 16:55:

nice work again mate..

track is really nice, although it misses something that makes it outstanding but nice track for sure. looking forward to your next productions!

Pascal

Posted by Trancevision on Apr-20-2006 14:32:

thank you everybody for reviewing my track, I am going to rework the bassline, the percussions and the snarefills.

I am very glad that you all downloaded it and gave me some feedback.

Trancevison

Posted by Nemesis44 on Apr-21-2006 07:22:

Looking forward to hear the changes.

Cheers
Nem

Posted by Sunquest on Apr-21-2006 23:16:

Hey mr vision, i wont mention anything on mastering its probably all been said, just wanted to say this tune is great really uplifting, and not the cheap style, its what i call a "making sense" melody

really nice stuff, keep it up!

Posted by Trancevision on Jan-07-2007 12:05:

I updated this thread for all those people who are interested in our music, especially in this track

Posted by Mycron on Jan-07-2007 13:44:

fantastic news, congrats mate!