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Posted by linkmage on Apr-18-2006 18:24:

moonbird - trancia

Hi again...

Finally I finished it...

moonbird - trancia

LINK

So,let me know what you think

Birdie

Posted by cybernetica on Apr-19-2006 00:19:

Hey,
commenting as I listen.
Kick is great. Bass is present, good. It could maybe get a little funkier. The notes are too long IMO.
Strange chords. The thing is getting a little too chaotic around 1:00 in my opinion. Maybe some additional EQing will help cleaning things up.
2:30 is a nice moment, but after that short stabbing lead fades out you shouldnt let it fade in right after.
During the breakdown I was bored a little. But then you got that massive fill which works quite well.
After the fill it sounds okay. The chords are still a little odd, but the groove works quite well now.
Mustnt forget to mention the great pads. The second breakdown is much better in my opinion.
I am not 100% sure about this one. The groove works quite well, but it didnt really hold my attention. Maybe you still need to clean up the mix a little. Dont get me wrong, it sounds very good already. Keep it up!

Posted by linkmage on Apr-20-2006 04:58:

Thanks for your reply..this definetely has point.

maybe someone else?