Very first track - Critisizm needed

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Posted by schafer on May-15-2006 23:25:

Very first track - Critisizm needed

This is my very fist track. I was hoping I could get some tips on how I can improve. I know this track sucks, please dont tell me that. I am wondering what I can do to make it sound more professional. Thank you!

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-Steve

Posted by azndragon0613 on May-16-2006 03:18:

I personally don't like reverb on kick. Percussion is simple. The super saw is nice and fat, very full. You need a bassline and some transition effects [sweeps/reverse crashes]. Good start.

Posted by covert23 on May-16-2006 19:47:

good start...get a fat baseline some efx etc etc...arrangment is ok..
percs a bit loud..mastering ok..synth is fat...keep it up...

Posted by cmay119 on May-16-2006 23:22:

The bass thud through out seemed too loud and overwhelming. Hope that helps you a little bit.

EDIT: Sorry, past the criticizm however, I really like where this track is going, and what it could be. So like the others above me have stated, keep working on it, and it will be a great ear friendly track.

Posted by schafer on May-17-2006 07:07:

thanks guys im new to production so anything helps me!

Posted by fletch.dj on Jun-03-2006 17:06:

To say that is your first it has good direction it should turn out well.one thing that will help you along is a site i use a lot www.naughtyaudio.com have a look there is a lot of stuff there to help you.