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Posted by mavve on May-24-2006 18:53:

Dog Running Mavve - Into the deep [3.40 sample][ progresive 192kbs]

Hi boys and girls of TA. Ive been offline for sometime now so I havent been able to post my comments on your tracks for the last month or so, had some trouble with my ISP, well im here again and will continue to do my best trying to comment. sry for me being offline for so long. its time to review again =)

While ive been gone I made a track and I upploaded it to myspace due to the inconvinience whit YSI.com would be nice to hear your toughts and comments, its a progresive piece named Into the deep.

See you around - Love - Mavve



Track name : Into the deep
myspace.com/mavvea

New Link: 192kbps Into the deep
sorry for insulting your ears =)


Posted by Akia on May-25-2006 17:08:

It sounds nice, nothing unexpected but a nice melody and good synths. A pretty nice job!

Akia


Posted by adam_rodriguez on May-26-2006 00:12:

hey man..i like this..really chilled stuff..love those faint vocals samples in the background and plinky melody..nice hi hats and good spacey FX.

Not too keen on the big synth that comes in the breakdown..sounds quite 80's..liking when the kick and percussion come back in and the subtle melodies are playing-good to listen in the summer!...yeah i like it - good work!

Adam


Posted by EtherealSL on May-26-2006 17:04:

myspace bitrates are crap so i can't really tell much about the production... kick sounds a bit weak.

gets a little messy around the 2 minute mark.

this song is obviously more upbeat than your other ones, can't say i like it more than "electric culture." speaking of which, what'd you end up doing with that one?


Posted by mavve on May-26-2006 19:42:

Hi guys, tnx Akia for the comment, Ill try to make it a litle bit more "special" and change some of the araengment or so.

Yooo Adam Im glad you liked it I had fun producing it =) hmm wich big synth do you speak of the ione that continues at the climax? If so ill take care of it. Tnx for the review mate =)

and tnx Nishant for always giving honest comments, I dont know about the kick im kinda satisifed whit it. It might be the crapy myspace player that gives it a bad name or my monitors =( so I upploaded a 192 kbps Sample instead give it a listen and tell me what you think.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...15BE0780799E8F3

hahaha electric culture is one of my personal favourites to, Its finnished I only need to record the last vocals. Ill give you a shout when its final. btw i love Inamorata great tune with an incredible melody.

Have nice day Boys. - Mavve


Posted by EtherealSL on May-26-2006 20:29:

yea the kick is pretty damn weak here.... not punchy enough on low end here... hope that helps man


Posted by sterilis on May-27-2006 00:46:

dont really want to repeat waht people have said but the kick needs some beefing up mate.

very progressive as expected from you. not too keen on the synth choices here. would like to hear something more deep and similar to your old tracks. still a nice track though. well produced and good drive.

good atmospheric efx going on. really fills the space well. not much else to comment other than nice work so far. a few adjustments and i think this track will pick up.

cheers

kane


Posted by mavve on May-28-2006 10:31:

tnx guys Ill look into it and add som lows, And a main melody.

- Mavve


Posted by Subtle on May-28-2006 20:32:

nice groove.. i dig the blips and beeps.. the break is nice.. percussions and drive is excellent.. this is kinda music i like.. great work


Posted by Snowave on May-28-2006 22:59:

Re: Mavve - Into the deep [3.40 sample][ progresive 192kbs]

quote:
Originally posted by mavve
Hi boys and girls of TA. Ive been offline for sometime now so I havent been able to post my comments on your tracks for the last month or so, had some trouble with my ISP, well im here again and will continue to do my best trying to comment. sry for me being offline for so long. its time to review again =)

While ive been gone I made a track and I upploaded it to myspace due to the inconvinience whit YSI.com would be nice to hear your toughts and comments, its a progresive piece named Into the deep.

See you around - Love - Mavve



Track name : Into the deep
myspace.com/mavvea

New Link: 192kbps Into the deep
sorry for insulting your ears =)


Mr maor. Have you been tuning again =) weeel im'm surely like this one =) Its make twisting in front of the computer. I would like to know how it would be with a fullversion. I do not complain on the kick. Sometimes it could be override and be even to muck to high the kick. Maybe the bassline do would be great to make lower and pushed a little bit. But i like this track in the shape it has. Its just my opppinion if would do remix or something on the track it would have a different sound also etc. See yaaa

Cheers! Snowave �=o)


Posted by mavve on May-30-2006 11:21:

Hi guys tnx for the comments.
Subtle its always good when you like a tune =) as you might have noticed the drive was my primary object while making this, this tune is made because a fellow producer of mine doubted I could make a Club tune whit good drive=) Tnx again Subtle.

And Snowave its always fun to see fellow swedes in the scene, Tnx for listening but you might have been mistaking me with mr maor tho his a great producer it isnt me =) Im happy I made you twist around hahaha always a great sign.

The final will be a vocal trance track. ill upp it when finnished. Tnx guys and have a great day

Love - Mavve


Posted by Vizay on May-30-2006 11:41:

I like the overall sound and atmosphere of the track, it gives me kind of a dizzy feeling when all the sounds are mangling at around 2 minutes

but you do need a stronger kick, that one works as a complement so you can play around a little with it but you need to add another kick with the low end power in it.

but overall a nice track, really nice. Make shure you finish it!


Posted by Snowave on May-30-2006 16:15:

quote:
Originally posted by mavve
Hi guys tnx for the comments.
Subtle its always good when you like a tune =) as you might have noticed the drive was my primary object while making this, this tune is made because a fellow producer of mine doubted I could make a Club tune whit good drive=) Tnx again Subtle.

And Snowave its always fun to see fellow swedes in the scene, Tnx for listening but you might have been mistaking me with mr maor tho his a great producer it isnt me =) Im happy I made you twist around hahaha always a great sign.

The final will be a vocal trance track. ill upp it when finnished. Tnx guys and have a great day

Love - Mavve

Sorry for mistaking =) but i like the track =)


Posted by Speactra on May-30-2006 21:47:

Hello there Mavve!

I really like this track, the break is wonderful
Love the flute, want to hear it more

I think you should evolve with the flute, making some kinda of a lead of it..
The one at the beggining of the break is great, want to hear it with the beat too.

Kick sounds kinda weak, some more low end too it would bdo just great.

Longing for the final version Wonder how it will be with vocals

//Alexander


Posted by Aquarian on May-30-2006 21:49:

Very nice and moody. I like.

Some of the synths sound a bit.... odd.. (I don't know how else to put it), especially in the second half of the sample. But then it's progressive. I love the percussion work, very nice and groovy. I don't think the kick is bad at all (then again, I like low volume kicks - I never understood why people like having a kickdrum so loud it buries everything else).

sorry about not replying earlier, I completely forgot


Posted by mylespower on May-31-2006 05:35:

yeah nice cool track.. all those sounds.... sounding nice and full of atmospheric progginess


as everyone else said... beef up kick

i had the same problem with the track i posted to... i didnt even really realize it until people on here pointed it out


Posted by mylespower on May-31-2006 05:36:

i guess sometimes you get so into a track it is possible to forget about that all important kick that makes this music great


Posted by mavve on May-31-2006 21:19:

tnx for the replies guys I feel the kick is kinda good at this level, but to compromise I beefed it up a bit =) Ive added another "straight break" open for the vocals. lets see if it gets as good in the track as in my head , I did a litle test and it sounded very good kinda say hellois/tracking treasure down =)

Tnx for the comment Snowave: Im glad you compared me to Mister maor =)

vizay tnx for the reply Im considering a low punchy kick atm but lets se how it goes whit that. tnx for the suggestion.

Yoo alexander hur e l�get. Tnx for commenting Im longing for the final to hahah I hope it gets driving enough to make a club go wild.

tnx aquarian im also the low volume kick person hehehe, but hey some like the heavy stuff and folks like me and you like it smoth.

Tnx myles for the comment. guys this man is talented 2 months and he makes tracks I made after 2 years (atleast).

Have a nice day - Mavve



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