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[Dark Acid] Rinster - Collagenous Vision [Full 192Kbps] +Streaming

hey guys, i tried to make this track as dark as possible.. it also has some Goa influences, im quite happy the way it is... just wanted your opinion

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Software used : Magix Audio Studio & Sony Soundforge 7.

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3:15Minutes

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Thanks!

Bidor

Hey mate,

nice introduction. The beat is really great!
Acidline starting @ 0:45 is not really my taste. It sounds too hollow in a way... you could try to use another waveform, maybe another synth... and then try to apply some FX to it.
Gotta mention it again... the percussions are really great, very detailed and interesting, they dont get boring at all. The minimal melody in the background isnt bad either.
The only real weak point of the track is the acidline - you should also try to alter the patterns and make the melody change, maybe to make it a better groove together with the percussion.
Keep it up!

Hi bidor.

At intro your kick is really powerfull but when the whole beat is palying is weak....at 1:42 is ok again... ...strange
Actually I was expecting something completely different from what I'm listening.I can't find any goa influences inside.Think is more experimental than dark.Something like big intro.Don't like the note that play at high octaves.Too repetitive.
The style of the track is something like soundtrack.

Be patient

Not too shabby Mr. Rinster. I do not enjoy your low quality stream-age, or the pop at the beginning of the track.

But musically. Your song isn't too shabby. A lot of times people make "dark" tracks that mainly are dark just because they don't have much, if any melodic elements. (Granted I LOVE that stuff, but it's definately a small doses thing, I can't listen to a lot of it).

This piece on the other hand yield's itself some darkness, without throwing out melodic elements.

Since the audio compression is so horrible I won't be able to give you technical advice on your track. But it's pretty cool otherwise.

You know what might be cool for this track? Instead of lots of breaks, and then going back into the 4/4 kick. Just make this a dark, acidy breaks track. Give some good boom tisk boom boom tisk rinster!

Now throw me a bone, and give my completed track a review-zors
woot it's updated and completed

---Adam Wrzeski
---Wrzonance

@Cybernetika :

thanks mate really liked your review! melody changing has always been a problem for me, coz it takes me ages to consider what kind op type melody fits with the track.. the minimal melody at the background i found kinda cool glad you liked it...

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@Sparkunian :

i havent really noticed the kick difference between the beginning and 1:42 but maybe its because ive heard the track to many times already..
there are very minimal goa influences in the track.. try and find them like i said very minimal. Be patient?? i dont understand please elaborate.. thanks for the review though

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@DJFreaq :

not to shabby? why what have i done lol.. yeah i tried to make it as dark as possible.. glad you liked it about the audio compression i think i must have done something wrong while recording, i can only hear it in the beginning.. it isnt that bad though thanks for the review anyway

Very retro feeling on the intro, it feels like the electro stuff you began to hear on the first half of the 80's, really nice touch at 1:15, I am avoiding to comment about mixdown cuze I am using Pc Speakers.
In overall, is a nice tune, but it sounds a bit amateur, not really amateur, I mean, it feels naive, but it has a nice and fun electro vibe.
Keep it up bidor .
Kopi =o.

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Originally posted by bidor not to shabby? why what have i done lol.. yeah i tried to make it as dark as possible.. glad you liked it about the audio compression i think i must have done something wrong while recording, i can only hear it in the beginning.. it isnt that bad though thanks for the review anyway

LOL. Naw. It was good, not just shabby, what I was complaining about the AUDIO compression of the streaming file. That was poopy. So I couldn't give you a fair assesment on overall sonic quality.

@Kopi_luwak :

thanks for the review! the overall mixdown is done quite bad.. i could have done it better. i guess i was rushing the track to much.. i havent really hear electro stuff from the 80's as im from 87 myself glad you like it mate

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@DJFreaq :

poopy? lol yeah the audio compression was quite bad.. like i said i could have done it better.. i was rushing it a bit to much.. cheerio,

Bidor

Yea I've decided not to swear as much. So I'm replaceing words like "shit" with "poopy" and "fuck" with "booby-doo"

Good show though on your track. Keep it up.

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Originally posted by DJFreaq Yea I've decided not to swear as much. So I'm replaceing words like "shit" with "poopy" and "fuck" with "booby-doo" Good show though on your track. Keep it up.

thanks mate it means a lot to me!
swearing is no good, although i hear it everyday and im used to it already.. poopy and booby-doo are a good alternative though

The bass in the intro is really quiet.

I like the percs in the intro.

I'm not a big fan of the hesitant way you bring in the kick.

You need to keep the beat in here for longer. It's hard to get in the groove of the song when the groove drops out every 30 seconds.

The acid line seemed to get quieter in that last section.

This song is dark as child playing broken synth.
Very natural Remind's me of some music of my own. Not very wise but easy to listen. And finaly it has very funny ending

@bidos
I heard more of your songs and I think you have an interesting style. Keep working

The perc and the beat is really good, so is the dark melody, but I dont think that bass does anything for the tune. And where is the climax in this thing, does it have any progression?...difficult to know.
All i know is that the bass kind of have an annoying immature sound, kind of doesnt have any groove or flow either. But it's a taste experience.

guys thank you! for all the feedback! i am going to take everything in consideration for the updated version or for my newer tracks! really appreciate it!

Bidor

edit : i think i have paid to much attention on the beat/percs instead of the bass...

Indeed a very dark track..

Beat is very good! Great work on that!

I really like the lead, it makes this track original.

Nothing really more too say, cool track

thanks mate for the reply, glad you liked it

i like the beat hesitation in the beginning....
kick is lack'n a bit of punch.
i like the structure of the track, really different and unpredictable.
that high pitch ringing noise is kind of anoying.
there are pads, hats, and a kick. don't really hear anything complimenting the percussion aspect of the track....
gets a little repetitious for me though, numerous breaks yet not many changes.

hey... uh... i like the serioussnessessess around 1:10...
high synth should be pitched down.
heh... for some reason it reminds me of Juno Reactor's stuff
the bass should be eq'd properly...

this is more music less 4x4 kick. i like it...

thanks for the reviews guys! i think ill make a remade version soon... but im not sure yet.. glad you guys like it

Bidor

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