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Posted by Final Call on Jul-10-2006 20:31:

[Uplifting Trance]Bryant P - Love Affection (Original) 192 Kpbs Full

Hello everyone..i've just finished a uplifting melodic tune and was wondering if anyone here could give feedback. I had a few people saying it has potential..but..hey i could use more advice lol.I was going for something classic wise..with a bit of a summer feel with the piano stabs . Check it out and bad/good comments are always welcomed !
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...67487992A68AB15


Posted by music2dance2 on Jul-10-2006 21:35:

Sounds interesting d/l and will comment soon.


Posted by optik on Jul-11-2006 00:20:

intro is nicely produced; I think that the FX sounds are a little too high in the mix,

nice basslines.

I think it needs a richer pad at 1:40, it kinda sounds a little seperated; nice tho.

structure is a little strange from 2:25-2:44 - I'd cut a lot of it.

get a fatter richer pad in that breakdown - that's all it's missing.

musically good break

3:42 - is very very very ferry c1999 - like that but a lot of people will say it's very dated; screw em, it's when trance was at it's best (so far)

looses energy after about 4:30 - needs something to come in and lift it.

good track


Posted by Final Call on Jul-11-2006 00:54:

ah okay..was trying to add a richer pad..but couldn't find anything suitable at the moment.


Posted by davide_86 on Jul-11-2006 02:23:

excellent job mate !, this really sounds professional and has huge potential. if i may ask how did you that bassline ? its awesome!


Posted by Final Call on Jul-11-2006 02:32:

ah thanks!..um i just started out with a simple bassline..and then i did a full running bassline over it if thats what you wanted to know.


Posted by davide_86 on Jul-11-2006 10:41:

hardware drum machine i meant or software ?

one suggestion i would put a simpler bassline in the beginning then convert to how the song actually starts, kind of use a 4/4 beat then introduce an FX effect and start the song(how it actually starts), coz how the song actually starts sounds like a CUT.


Posted by Final Call on Jul-11-2006 11:15:

>.< yeah it does sound like a cut lol. It's all software =)


Posted by Dipzta on Jul-13-2006 19:55:

There are many bad songs out there ("even" commercials)
but this song was very good.
Cosy small lead melody, good and tight bass.
It may lacks a bit of "meat" to the song.

As Optik said, a bit Ferry @ ca 3 mins, but still cool

Good job =)

-Dipzta


Posted by music2dance2 on Jul-13-2006 21:16:

Late reply sorry, I like the bassline its very cool. Some nice melodies and percs are good to. The clap is Ferry like to but its good. The break is great, good atmosphere and builds right. Nice effcts to. Cant fault this. Nice 1.


Posted by Final Call on Jul-13-2006 21:50:

cheers!! thanks for all the comments guys =)


Posted by Akia on Jul-15-2006 04:44:

Really nice, the break is awesome! Think you can build it up more in the beginning thou. But I like it! Well done!

Akia



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