Where do I take this? (House tune)

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Posted by PutBoy on Aug-08-2006 10:59:

Where do I take this? (House tune)

So I started this tune up. It's rather simplistic as it is, and the thing I'm mostly attracted to is the bassline. Rolling sort of. Anyways, I'm stuck. Is this something to persue?

http://www.fileden.com/files/2967/project%20060806.mp3

There is something about it that just doesn't cut it, maybe it just needs something more...

I'm thinking about naming it lucid or something similar.

Posted by daeus on Aug-08-2006 13:57:

This sounds like a casio keyboard demo lol.

Sorry it dosnt sound like house music to me.

Had another listen...take out that "childish" high notes thing thats going on over the bassline,then just build the song on that bassline if u can.

Posted by mysticalninja on Aug-08-2006 15:09:

That bass line needs to be 1000x funkier. Overall song needs more FX and reverb too.

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Had another listen...take out that "childish" high notes thing thats going on over the bassline,then just build the song on that bassline if u can.

Agree, that lead just isn't doing it for me.

Check out my latest song, pretty housey. Now that's a house bass.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...A3163F07A336B55

Crit welcome.

Posted by Adam Scott on Aug-08-2006 17:47:

I agree. Scrap the lead synths (for now at least). If you want to make a decent house track focus on your bassline.

Posted by ASFSE on Aug-08-2006 18:36:

is that a ts404?

Posted by PutBoy on Aug-08-2006 18:37:

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Originally posted by ASFSE
is that a ts404?

Albino for leads and Pressure for bassline.

Posted by mysticalninja on Aug-08-2006 18:44:

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Originally posted by ASFSE
is that a ts404?

LOL.. TS404 wasn't that bad was it?