Platoon demo - 320Kbps 3.16mins..

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Posted by avengie on Aug-19-2006 18:20:

Platoon demo - 320Kbps 3.16mins..

Hey fellow TA s

I was changing my usual style a little bit... this is still unfinished but would like to give you a sneak peek at it... i met a girl and i made this track thinkin of her lol ...

i would like a feedback good or bad about this.... much more has to be done to finish this track... this is the middle of the track.... might change in the end depending on the feedbacks and my personal preference....

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.p...38E56B713EC1E18

enjoy TA s....
Cheers

Posted by Akia on Aug-19-2006 23:46:

Yeah, it�s more driving but you haven�t lost your awesome atmosphere! The melody is really nice too! Good job so far, keep it up!

P.S I�m sure your girl will love it! D.S

Takere!

Akia

Posted by HarryMoore on Aug-20-2006 00:33:

this track is excellent.

what i dont like about it is the hi hats, they are to harsh

and needs to be a bit more punchy

appart from that its the atmosphere is excellent.

Posted by avengie on Aug-20-2006 02:43:

Thanks..... I normally have my armosphere going on in all my tracks.... but i decided to change my style a little bit. Im goin to finish it soon.... and thanks for the comments again.....

Posted by Mr Rogers on Aug-20-2006 03:03:

really nice atmosphere with the pads, kick needs more oomph.
the overall mix sounds a little flat imo.
was waiting for the break for a new melody to break out, but nope.
really nice beat with nice flow, just doesn't seem to go anywhere.
great job

Posted by Freesoup on Aug-20-2006 09:36:

Its very flat and muffled and sounds like alot of other basic trance tunes.

You clearly have abit of knowledge when it comes to making tracks but need to apply abit more creativity. All in all I suppose it depends what you are trying to achieve.

Keep at it

Posted by Akia on Aug-20-2006 09:47:

...maybe you should add vocal to it to make it more interesing.

Posted by avengie on Aug-20-2006 12:41:

Thanks alot for other comments as well....

As i said, i just uploaded a little demo so far.... it will come out great when its done.... im really digging this to have new ideas to make this more interesting.. the intros and breakdowns are done but its not that interesting if i give the whole thing as a demo yet.... so i will complete this within two weeks and post it back....

but the comments are most welcomed as im going this.....

Cheers