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Posted by Rayan on Aug-31-2006 14:53:

Ryan - Star (Vocal trancer) Upgrade: now with the take off lead part!

Hello.. Well, I sing on it.
Made this one today

need some feedback on it!

PRESS HERE!!!

Well.. here it is.

and here is the clip with the lead part. I really need to hear from you guys what you think? shuld I use more of my melodic side? or shuld It be plain like this?

I`m a bit unsure about how I want it. So, please.

LEAD TAKE OF <---- Lead take off part

Cheers!
Ryan

Posted by Akia on Sep-01-2006 17:53:

Driving with a nice kick and bass, I like the melody too and I have said it before but I will say it again: You have a really nice voice!
But the lyric don�t impress me mutch (sorry neighbour!). Anyway, a good job!

Takere!

Akia

Posted by Ryarni on Sep-01-2006 20:02:

Wow, really good, your voice is actually the hook rather than the melody, brilliant stuff!

I would use/buy this for sure

Posted by djx2 on Sep-02-2006 09:33:

Really like this track!! The vocal is awesome!!

Posted by Rayan on Sep-03-2006 19:31:

hehe.. Hello and thanks

yeah. Akia: The lyrics on the vocal is just a test. I will have something more deep, and more understandable. Like a tekst with a meaning! if you see. And thanks for thinking my voice is nice, neighbour!

Ryarni: what you meean by "hook"? really wanted to buy this?

djx2: thanks! Soo cool you guys think the vocal is nice. but the lyric will be something else though!

Thanks! More reviews are very welcome

Posted by d-jay MyTH on Oct-03-2006 22:02:

I think you are definitely one to watch and I predict big things for you. There is a certain unique stamp you put on all your tracks and I'm always excited when I see your name pop up on this forum.

Keep on at it - you have very interesting production and you are a raw talent.

Posted by Sunclyder on Oct-04-2006 05:58:

Siemax Rayan

Nice M8

I Like your song

Sounds & melody are very good

Greetings
Karol

Posted by lightside on Oct-04-2006 07:06:

this really isnt much of my style at all nowadays but i gave it a go ahead. here is my take on it.

from the get -go i am prejudiced against male vocals trance. with the exception of the chicane - bryan adams collabarations i think that male vocals in trance walks a thin line on sounding really gay. that said...

youre lyrics could use some meaning. your voice is way better than mine (thus i am not a singer) so you should be taking advantage of that. honestly the vocal did not "hook" me it sounded a bit generic, rather the guitar i found to be a nice touch. Did you play that or use a sample? if you are a guitarist i think you should continue to use the guitar in your productions. I may try to add some guitar into some of mine tho its a bit harder to fit it in with the dirty, techy groove i am doing nowadays.

looks like you've got a humble fan-club here to support you so keep it up you can only get better!

Posted by Rayan on Oct-04-2006 08:45:

woow! Thought this thread was dead for months ago :P hehe

d-jay MyTH:

quote:
I think you are definitely one to watch and I predict big things for you.

thanks you soo much. That one will I remember

Sunclyder:
thanks for review nice to hear!

Lightside:
I can not please all around me. hehe! well, its my first try with me singing in a trance song. And the lyrics is like I have said on a other review not the right lyrics. its just there to get a soundpicture of what it will be when its done. So, the lyrics will be "pimped" alot. trust me! doing some text writing right now

Yeah. I play guitar, I think I have a "guitar thingy" in every song I make. hehe!

but, thanks for the review! its the best one I have got for a looong time. Like the honest ones!

Ryan

Posted by KAKAAKlol on Oct-04-2006 12:46:

the lead sample i really liked!

Posted by No_Boundaries on Oct-04-2006 19:16:

Nice song,

what I like the most was the downtempo with the entrance of the vocals and guitar.

Good track.

Peace...

Posted by Rayan on Oct-04-2006 21:42:

KAKAAKlol:
hehe. Yeah. The lead is cool :P like it to!

No_Boundaries: ohh. cool! :P thanks!�

Posted by mavve on Oct-05-2006 00:38:

im in to vocal trancers now days , so ill give it a go =)
driving intro , buildup is good , I like the atmo wah wah guitars gives it a personal touch, love the bass line and the progresion of it.

you might wana add som Sfx here and there to make it more "alive".

so far this is really good.

Break now and Im not keen of the saw sounding synth melody.but thats a matter of taste.

heheh great voice I must say but I hear 1 or 2 notes that dont fit in, love the guitar work.

I was hoping to hear the explosion but maybe next time, overall its good takle care of the vocals and this might be something.

yours / Mavve

Posted by Rayan on Oct-05-2006 23:09:

Hi mavve

thanks! hehe. great voice well, thanks! hm. more fx`s here and there will be done soon been thinking the same.
What explosion you meen?

If you have not noticed, I got a own link on the main-thread to the "lead take of part". maybe thats the explosion you are looking for, like the climax! hehe take a look and see if its that!

cheers!

Posted by The Drow on Oct-06-2006 14:18:

The rev crashes at the start are a bit annoying.
I really like the guitar.
The kick is nice and firm but it's too much in your face and swollows up the bassline a bit.
2:34 is kinda ugly with the pitch bending.
The strings are nice.
You have a really nice voice.
The lyrics are just like any other none full lyrical trance track. Silly vocals that just fill up some space.
The arp is really good.
I would really like to hear the full track.
Damm that lead is really good.
8/10