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[Uplifting] Sterilis - Forgotten

I've completely drawn a blank on this one. i can't think of where to go next with it. I've tried some things people have said but it hasn't progressed the track.

if some people could let know what they think of it so far and ideas of where to take it that would be great. Also if someone wants to have a go at finishing it i wouldn't mind that either.

Anything at all good or bad is helpful!

Thanks

Sterilis - Forgotten

I can not really see the problem here, you already have the sound! The melody, the atmosphere, the break (it�s so cool!), it�s all there. I�m not a producer my self but you asked for even bad ideas so... I think it should come a climax right were it ends, with a lot of energy. After that, hmmm... when I don�t know where to go with a lyric I go back to the beginning and see if I can reuse something from there. Not sure you can do that with music but, well, don�t think I can help you more .

Hope you find a way to finish it, I really like it!


Takere!

Akia

Ha, I would use other Fx's, those one are overused mate, also, to enchant the Fx's I always pan them in bar with automatization, remember that we listen in stereo so this lil things are really nice for the stereo .
The build up is there, but sounds pretty basic atm mate, if you are beginign I would say u have pretty much the overall idea but it sounds amateur .
The tune is going in good direction, I can hear u have been emulating the b uild up from the clasic Trance tunes, that's a good way to learn .
In overall, the sound is pretty clean, that's a good point, there are some minor details to check out but is pretty clean, the build up and the tune itself sounds amateur but in a good direction, it only needs to be polished and more experience and u have it, the idea is there, and dont over use the Fx's .

Kopi =o.

thanks for responses!

akia: glad to hear some positives on it.

kopi: could you tell me what sounds amateur about it as this is a problem i want to stamp out.

cheers

hey man

a new track! nice..

listening:- great drive and very clean sound. percs work well. kick is good.

bass - turn it up in the mix. the warmth will increace.

synths are a bit here and there imo. kinda like the choice of sounds have not been really thought about too much. they need slower introduction. hint on them for a while before they fully arrive into the mix. i would not call this amature. but not fresh sounding. the melodies/sounds are a little generic.

imo i think you should go back to your earlier tracks and remake some of them with your improved prod skills. mainly one of the first you posted ages ago. i liked it. and it had a sound that has dissapeared from you recently. cant place it..



overall this track doesnt make me go wow. if you know what i mean. but there is nothing really unpleasant about it..

rich

Any chance you could send me this on msn Barry? My Internet is dire atm, I can't download any songs or review anything. Might as well be on fucking dial-up....

cheers rich. i wanted to remake that track wonderful angel i had a while back although ive lost the cubase file to it and i dont even have the sample i posted on TA to try and recreate it. my producing has gone off course recently, think ive lost alot of my originality elements in tracks.

Hey Barry

Firstly, I notice your production skills are getting better, things are a lot clearer, and your equing is better.
Nice start with the percs, and cool melodies coming in. Perhaps they are a little thin sounding though.
Good main melody too, it's nice without being too memorable.
Overall I think you're improving, perhaps you could work on widening the song out a little, and fattening up some of the synths.
Keep it up!

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