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Posted by Haunted on Feb-01-2007 10:35:

a short play i just wrote.

it's called

waste.

AZRARARWORHG,
said the lion
CXMCON101010 GO DELTA
said the crazy robot
(audience laughter)
Let's go Red Team! We'll show those lions what the good ol' US of A is all aboot! said the hot blonde big boobed squadron Captian Jill
Huh? said the Captian CockfaceMan of the Blue Team with a puzzled look on his face
Aboot? are you a CANDIAN SPY?!?@!
ES!!@!! said Jill, with a horny apathatic look on her face, with a slight drool, and bedroom eyes, and white substance on her lips

THE END?

fin.

it has everything, comedy, romance, action.

Posted by medinaM5 on Feb-01-2007 10:36:

here's one i wrote

ban! said wicked neo
(cor laughter)

Posted by Halcyon+On+On on Feb-01-2007 10:36:

Needs more cowbell.

Posted by Sushipunk on Feb-01-2007 12:09:

quote:
Originally posted by Halcyon+On+On
Needs more cowbell.

Wicked Neo never needs more cowbell.

It's his privilege.

Posted by jdat on Feb-01-2007 13:47:

that script was unreadable

you are obviously new in the bizz

Posted by Ed G on Feb-01-2007 14:08:

Are you considering a sequel?

What about a movie deal?

Posted by denys envy on Feb-01-2007 14:16:

quote:
Originally posted by Ed G
Are you considering a sequel?

What about a movie deal?

or suicide, even.

Posted by Ed G on Feb-01-2007 14:52:

quote:
Originally posted by Aristronica
or suicide, even.

It would be so elegent to pair up homicidal types with suicidal types.

Posted by SuspicionVandit on Feb-01-2007 15:32:

Re: a short play i just wrote.

quote:
Originally posted by Haunted

Let's go Red Team! We'll show those lions what the good ol' US of A is all aboot! said the hot blonde big boobed squadron Captian Jill

this is offensive. i was attacked by a lion when i was 12