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Posted by ASFSE on Apr-22-2007 08:53:

[tech/club] Air Raid *UPDATED 4.26.07*

http://www.myspace.com/glassstiger

it should be the first song to play, but if not then check 4.21.07sirens.

it's a work in progress, but you can see how it's comin' togethor...

pce.

--=*UPDATED 4.26.07*=--

added the title and changed some things, im done with this for now...gonna let it sit around and i'll come back to it with fresh ears...

Posted by Akia on Apr-22-2007 12:38:

Sounds pretty cool, but a bit too repetitive for my taste right now. Nice puls. Keep working!

Takere!

Akia

Posted by offthebeat on Apr-22-2007 15:27:

not my type of music, but i can tell u got some skills, respect!

Posted by ASFSE on Apr-22-2007 17:21:

thnx for the listens

Posted by Zombie0729 on Apr-23-2007 00:00:

tuned in here...

i like the stuttered white noise fx... chop it up a bit more for some added rhythm though

not sure how i feel about the whole thing being sidechained... maybe add a really tight snare or a punchy'r kick because as much as sidechain makes its own rhythm this seems to null it a bit

ok the horn/high string... i can't handle it. still can't handle it. yup, hate it.

i do like the bassline, i think its eq'd at a perfect spot and i don't think you need to change it. instead of having a high string side chain'd try some stabbier synths on the 1st and last measure of hte bassline. something very analogue sounding

needs some work but could be cool

Anthony

Posted by Allied Nations on Apr-23-2007 00:49:

quote:
Originally posted by Zombie0729

not sure how i feel about the whole thing being sidechained... maybe add a really tight snare or a punchy'r kick because as much as sidechain makes its own rhythm this seems to null it a bit

Totally-

It needs punchier highs in the percussion, it lacks that bite at the moment.

solid effort, great work in progress. I like the horn string, bit played out but it workds

Posted by ASFSE on Apr-23-2007 01:17:

i appreciate your comments, and i'll look in to the things mentioned.

Posted by G-Con on Apr-23-2007 17:55:

not bad, needs a bit more variation here and there for my taste. The high siren sound needs a bit more texture, it feels a bit too static (apart from the pitch changes of course).

Like others have said, its lacking enough high freq percussion, sounds a bit muffled.

Reading this back I sound as though I think its crap which I dont but these are the things I would work on...

Posted by ASFSE on Apr-23-2007 20:22:

well when i get some time i will make changes(i really need some better monitors), and take into consideration everything you guys have mentioned...

thnx for listening gcon..i see u have a new work up, i'll check it out when i get home-- at school right now.

pce!

Posted by ASFSE on Apr-27-2007 22:39:

-=*UPDATED 4.26.07*=-

made some changes