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Posted by Jmanch on May-21-2007 21:03:

Jmanch - One Last Chance

Wondering if I could get some feedback on a track I just finished last night

'one last chance'

myspace.com/jmancha

Thanks for listening! All comments are welcome.

Posted by Beyer on May-23-2007 16:40:

Listening now..

I feel you've got something here, but there are several elements that should be sorted out to make it more interesting.

That plucked sound is weak sounding, could use some beefing up.
The kick is deeply buried, and most sounds are muffled. Could be useful to cut some unnecessary bass freqs..
There is also an issue with the stereo image. Everything is in the centre, and that will also mudden stuff up quickly, so I would try to use some stereo image enhancer on several parts here. And maybe pan some percussion slightly to the left and right. Make sure the overall "energy" of the sound is pretty much equal on both sides. The bass and kick must be centre, of course

More variation to the melody would be nice - maybe adding some interesting tweaks here and there. Just try to make the track interesting for the listeners.

Ok, could prolly write alot more - but I'll end it here. I liked it, but if you do some of the above it will be even better! Nice feel to it.

Posted by Jmanch on May-24-2007 05:59:

quote:
Originally posted by Beyer
Listening now..

I feel you've got something here, but there are several elements that should be sorted out to make it more interesting.

That plucked sound is weak sounding, could use some beefing up.
The kick is deeply buried, and most sounds are muffled. Could be useful to cut some unnecessary bass freqs..
There is also an issue with the stereo image. Everything is in the centre, and that will also mudden stuff up quickly, so I would try to use some stereo image enhancer on several parts here. And maybe pan some percussion slightly to the left and right. Make sure the overall "energy" of the sound is pretty much equal on both sides. The bass and kick must be centre, of course

More variation to the melody would be nice - maybe adding some interesting tweaks here and there. Just try to make the track interesting for the listeners.

Ok, could prolly write alot more - but I'll end it here. I liked it, but if you do some of the above it will be even better! Nice feel to it.

Good feedback, will take it into consideration
thanks for listening man.

Posted by Rinster on May-25-2007 10:47:

i fucking love the start!

man this is good i like the arpy lead, i like the breakdown and the melody. the pads are nice to, but when the breakdown starts it sounds a little empty and then the pad jump in, try to fill up that empty space there a bit, i like the arp lead in the breakdown.
this tune has big potential just needs some more work! at the climax maybe introduce a new synth with the same melody for a bit more variation..

keep it up, 8/10

greetz,

Bidor