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Posted by Rinster on Jun-12-2007 23:15:

Lightbulb Exceed - Syncrhonic Mastermind (Full 320Kbps) [Dark/Experimental/Hard House?]

hey guys ive been working on this tune for ages, this tune really represents my style of making music.. im proud to be sharing this with you guys, so please feedback would be perfect, and i return reviews.

enjoy,.

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cheers.,.


Bidor


Posted by Chris Crossland on Jun-13-2007 08:30:

Nice dude im getting into this. Ah, you have some notes off key. Could use another melody but it's pretty tight none the less. Let me get the pack see about a remix. I took a long enough break from producing. See what i can do.

Keep it up!


Posted by kitphillips on Jun-15-2007 07:19:

Again the beats are awesome, I really like the way everything sits in the mix and the sounds are very fat, I don't know that I could recomend anything to do with this...


Posted by 3F05Q on Jun-15-2007 07:27:

I think the mixing is great. Sounds, melody, rhythms all contribute to a dark feel.

3:07: Great shot of energy coming in.

Can't help but agree with gwrmarines about the off key stuff. Could be due to the sounds being in the same low range. Either way it might be worth taking a second look at.

Nice driving beats man!

"Keep it up!"

I second that.


Posted by Rinster on Jun-16-2007 11:18:

thanks guys, glad you all like it!

feedback returned as promised.


Posted by dj-holocaust on Jun-16-2007 15:26:

Nice sounding percussion like the white noises.

Think the track misses a pumpin dark bassline though.

The fx sounds you use are cool.

The track could do with some snare builds in various places before

the kick drum comes back in.

Think you've got an excellent appreciation of levels and the

percussion is tight but there isnt really much of a breakdown to get

everyone truly rocking and the track seems to end abruptly.

Some good ideas missing a few elements to take the dancefloor by the

scruff of the neck!


Posted by Rinster on Jun-17-2007 21:22:

quote:
Originally posted by dj-holocaust
Nice sounding percussion like the white noises.

Think the track misses a pumpin dark bassline though.

The fx sounds you use are cool.

The track could do with some snare builds in various places before

the kick drum comes back in.

Think you've got an excellent appreciation of levels and the

percussion is tight but there isnt really much of a breakdown to get

everyone truly rocking and the track seems to end abruptly.

Some good ideas missing a few elements to take the dancefloor by the

scruff of the neck!


thanks mate, i see what you mean with the bassline ill see what i can do with that.. there is a short breakdown where the pads jump in.,. but i kinda wanted to make this song more progressive aswell.

glad you liked it man.,. and thanks for the feedback! appreciate it.


Posted by Rinster on Jun-24-2007 03:50:

Bumpy

a remix made by ta member "Gwrmarines" is in my sig..
check it out, and ill return feedback

cheers,


Bidor


Posted by Spliph on Jun-24-2007 04:19:

i like this, try playing more with the hrad sounds/ snares

nice squirkin on that bass filter or sometin, and what re you saying there?

still a rough draft i assume, try adding reverb to the percs a bit!

keep on pushin...



I like the break part!


Posted by trancenation82 on Jun-26-2007 20:49:

Hey man, very nice peace of music, exceptionally well mixed and good to both chill and dance to when the mood is right. Would deffo recommend this one....4****

TN


Posted by Rinster on Jun-27-2007 23:24:

thanks guys for the feedback., . appreciate it!


Spliph feedback returned as promised


Posted by Rinster on Jul-03-2007 00:43:

Anybody else?


Posted by trancenation82 on Jul-04-2007 16:13:

Rasta

BUMP


Posted by azndragon0613 on Jul-04-2007 23:21:

Hey Bidor,

Nice strong kick to start things off. Feels like it sets the mood for the song. We'll see. I think that the percussion in the beginning could use a bit of delay so it keeps things a bit busier.

The treble shifts around 1 minute aren't in key which makes it sound weird to me. I guess you are going for something a bit unusual here. The pad-like lead that comes in is nice and fat. The pattern is fine for a couple of bars but afterwards it'd be cool to introduce a bigger more noticeable break so it doesn't feel dragged.

Not really my style but it sure is original. The production is clean and crisp. Just personal tastes here. Keep going at it.


Posted by canadian didjer on Jul-06-2007 23:34:

hey hey! I owe you a review. (check your PMs )

everything is grooving pretty good

the lead at 1:10 I think you could just let the first pattern hook and it would work.

about one 1:45 a very quirky lead comes in. eventually gets groovy. there are some very cool sound effects and such, littered around.

around 3:30 is pretty crazy. heh... the sirens .

and then it kinda ends awkwardly, I was kinda expecting it to keep going. maybe extend it?


Posted by AniG on Jul-07-2007 06:06:

nice sound, sounding full and everything.
got some real bottom end on that kick and its booming, sounds sick.

btw what's he saying, the voc near d start lol

interesting melodies, gives off that dark but almost techy feel.

3:23 onwards sounds like theres a lot going on, and a lot of the melodies in my head seem to clutter. sounds confusing lol

not a bad song, but it didnt seem like it really went ne where, i dont think i heard the main melody... if i did then it was more subtle than i thought.

not a bad production, maybe just not my style of music, but yeh, after 3:23mins i was sorta put off by hearing something that just sounded confusing.

keep producing, your mixing, technique and mastering's sick.


Posted by Takkra on Jul-08-2007 16:44:

hey bidor!

great track you've got here, everything sounds really good!

nice drive, great drive!

reminds a lot of the 2004 sensation black theme!

great style you're developing here

keep up the good work man!!


Posted by Gusarin on Jul-10-2007 21:39:

Hey Rinny - contact me please as soon as you can! I have some news and paperwork for ya! Thanks

Crawer



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