Uplifting Tune - back online, pls have a look :)

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Posted by Icone on Apr-15-2002 04:56:

Uplifting Tune - back online, pls have a look :)

Hey peepz

After a long wait, this track is finally back online now. Here's the link to it, pls have a look and tell me what you think of it :

lightworks - forever (original mix)

Thx, and sorry for the wait
Wim @ LW

Posted by DjArktik on Apr-15-2002 06:45:

Listening right now...bass comes in kinda odd, but sounds good...(hmm i wonder where that synth is from )...break is nice, and i like the melody ...piano sounds kinda cheesy, but then the lead comes in to make up for it...buildup rules...and so on...another quality lightworks production

Gr8 track m8...keep it comin

Posted by Icone on Apr-15-2002 12:00:

thx

thx for the comment mate

basslines are updated as requested

cheers !
Wim @ LW

Posted by dbl on Apr-15-2002 14:31:

sounds good as always... will hopefully have a new track online 2 soon

Posted by Icone on Apr-15-2002 15:32:

thx dbl
let me (read us) know about your new tune as well
take care!

Wim @ LW

Posted by oDrori on Apr-15-2002 18:44:

Wow, nice amount of emotions in that one !

2 Main things:

1) The main synth sounds kinda "Thin" for the melody it gets...
If ye know what I mean.

2) For me it's not your best work because it's just ANOTHER Lightworks quality work... Hoppe you take this as building critisizm, no offense.

Posted by robstar on Apr-15-2002 20:09:

quote:
Originally posted by oDrori
Wow, nice amount of emotions in that one !

2 Main things:

1) The main synth sounds kinda "Thin" for the melody it gets...
If ye know what I mean.

2) For me it's not your best work because it's just ANOTHER Lightworks quality work... Hoppe you take this as building critisizm, no offense.

I have to agree with oDrori here.
The main melody needs a phat synth

A also agree that this isn´t ur best work. I remember the first tune I downloaded from u , can´t remeber what it´s called but I remeber that it was a hell of a tune!

U got the gift u just need to spend more time on ur tunes.
I have a feeling u just spent a day or 2 on this one, right?

Listen to all the "pro´s" songs and compare em with ur tracks, try to get the same soundquality.
ie:
Spend more time on effects and stuff, try to use as little reeverb as possible but try to make it sound full and warm at the same time.

I have lots of problems with this my self!
Perfect Effect settings makes a big differance.

Cheers.

Posted by Icone on Apr-15-2002 21:10:

ok thx for your thoughts robstar

hmm well i did spend alot longer on it than just two days to get everything right, but i'll leave it at that... i'm a real amateur at this i know

see you later!
Wim @ LW

Posted by Robert on Apr-15-2002 21:14:

argh... i HATE mp3.com.. lemme go the painfull process again... argh.. gRRR

Posted by Icone on Apr-15-2002 22:08:

hehe, hey what's up buddy? do they ask your email again?
well just fill in ANYTHING you want, it doesn't matter what

Posted by Icone on Apr-15-2002 22:10:

didn't see your topic at first oDrori, cause robstar wrote such a big one

I know the main lead is a little thin, but it's to keep the track a little on the mellow side. i'll see if i can add some more things to it, but at the moment i'm pretty tired of working on it i'll get back to it if i can sometime later...

cheers, thx for your thoughts
Wim @ LW

Posted by Alccode on Apr-16-2002 00:08:

quote:
Originally posted by robstar
The main melody needs a phat synth

I very much agree with that. It is the only thing irking me about Forever - that it sounds a little "videogame"-ish if that makes sense. Just a little though - it is a very good track!

I recommend that you take on robstar's advice and add in a "phat synth" or something that brings out the lower frequencies. That way it will sound *even* better! It would very much be danceable then. Not that it isn't now, but it needs that spark.

Excellent work, man, I hope you take this bit of criticism positively!

Posted by Icone on Apr-20-2002 13:32:

thx Alccode, no offence taken at all

I'm in a happy mood today... dunno why maybe because of my honey, who knows

well, i edited the main lead, added a new string that adds the lower frequencies to the lead when the buildup ends en the beat kicks in again. that way it has a 'fuller' sound to it.

thx for your thoughts.
pls keep on commenting ppl, i wanna make this one good!

Posted by Icone on Apr-21-2002 13:01:

anyone else pls?

Posted by oDrori on Apr-21-2002 13:44:

Hey Wim, diju re-upload the track?

Posted by Icone on Apr-21-2002 16:18:

quote:
Originally posted by oDrori
Hey Wim, diju re-upload the track?

yeah sorry

the main lead is a little thicker now, i added some extra low sounds to it, so that it doesn't sound too thin anymore.

but i'm guessing it's gonna be up soon again

sorry for the wait
Wim