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Posted by Ra Noair on Jul-01-2007 15:06:

Stage3 - As Wet As A Fish

hi, i tried again to a trance track... i hope, you like it a litle bit... but its also not finished
BPM: 140
6:40 minutes
160kbt/s

Proggi Reason 3

http://www.orangespace.de/6eab4

or

http://www.yourfilehost.com/media.p...sWetAsAFish.mp3

Posted by AgentStarchild on Jul-01-2007 18:11:

Once everything comes in, it works pretty well. The introduction is a little awkward. I've always been told to open a track with a steady beat and simple instrumentals so that the DJ can sync it to whatever s/he was spinning previously. Honestly I would actually start your track 30 seconds into it. You have a drum dropout later in the song so you don't need to build up at the beginning from nothing. The hi-hats need to sound a little more fluid. The snare sounds pretty good. I would also have an open hi-hat or a strong "shhhhh" kind of sound going continuously on every upbeat (on the 3, 7, 11, and 15 if you divide the measure into its 16 16th notes).

One or perhaps more of your voices is echoing at a pace that tangles up the rhythm a little bit. One thing I do with my echoes is make the left side echo differently from the right side. I create two different delay boxes and pan one completely to the left and the other completely to the right. I link them to the mixer through which I'm feeding my synth rather than the synth directly. I usually echo my voices in the following patterns according to sixteenth notes (left: 3/16, right: 5/16 or left: 4/16, right: 7/16). I'm not sure if I explained that well. If you already know how to do all that, I apologize if I insulted your intelligence.

It just sounds like some of the things getting in your way are things that I have had to figure out. A lot of your intuitions are very good. Let me know whenever you revise this.

Peace, Agent Starchild

Posted by Ra Noair on Jul-01-2007 19:38:

oh je... sorry, tzhat i can't understand so much of your words... i will translate it at time... and the hihats i'll make better...