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Posted by Lockdown on Jul-10-2007 06:43:

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Hey everyone. Well I finally got a Virus TI and I have made a few tunes with it and Logic with some other plug-ins....let me know what you think of this tune. I think it is very nice and very driving. Let me know if you think it needs improvements....THANKS

http://download.yousendit.com/CE1D21E92E130BC2

If the file needs to be reposted let me know and I will post it again. Thanks again. Peace

Posted by AgentStarchild on Jul-11-2007 02:33:

Since I hate having 0 comments on my work, I've made it my mission to check out anybody's stuff that hasn't been commented on. I'm wondering if you would get better attention if you put your stuff on a site with a player so people don't have to download a 19 MB file in order to hear it. Check out www.soundclick.com.

As for the song, I think you need something melodic at the beginning. It drives me crazy when tracks start with all percussion and effects. Could you put some kind of strings or something? I really like the way everything just kind of falls in. It seems strong in that first main section there. Again, I would like to hear a stronger pad in the background. The mix seems very dry at this point. Maybe it just needs more reverb.

I'm not sure about completely high-passing the lead off into oblivion at 3:07. You don't want to have that dead space in the middle of the song. It's nice to have things drop out but I don't think you ever want complete silence unless it's right before something abrupt is going to happen. It seems too quiet for too long after that. You don't want people to think it's over and sit down.

In the parts when things are driving, it's very good. I like the blend of sounds in the second section better than the first.

I think transitions and some mix-type stuff are all that need work. I suck at transitions and mixing myself.

Best of luck, Agent

Posted by Lockdown on Jul-11-2007 16:26:

Thanks for the comments Agent. I am workin on changes as well as other tunes. Im going to take a look at soundclick.com. Thanks. I appreciate it.