tryin to complete this track, please help (myspace mp3 inside)

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Posted by Dilmeet on Jul-31-2007 13:40:

tryin to complete this track, please help (myspace mp3 inside)

Hey what's up guys

I'm really new at producing. I'am currently using ableton, w/o no hardware. Took me forever just to get where I'am at now. I know I'm still missing a lot of elements, so I need you guys to explain what am I missing, or what do I have to much of etc...

If you go to the myspace link, click on the song labeled "dynamic"

http://myspace.com/delchoons

I really want this track to be a track. Thanks

Posted by Dilmeet on Jul-31-2007 22:47:

Re: tryin to complete this track, please help (myspace mp3 inside)

need insight! flame if you have to!

Posted by Kid_presentable on Aug-01-2007 12:59:

Heh..

I listened to the gabriel & dresden track by accident wondering how you were not going to be able to finish it.

as for dynamic:
nice one.
It sounds like a ok chillout track as is. what are you aiming for?

chucking in a more prominant bassline mite amp it up a little.

Posted by newtrancer on Aug-03-2007 00:45:

i would add some more synths

like fx

and pads

Posted by theognis1002 on Aug-03-2007 01:29:

maybe some more bass or a more defined bassline

Posted by mysticalninja on Aug-03-2007 02:19:

nice percussion.

Posted by beats and beeps on Aug-03-2007 02:51:

dude dont fucking upload tracks that arent yours into your myspace.

and you fucking put your name as the artist.

or did you do something to that peter blah blah whatever guitar band track.

Posted by Dilmeet on Aug-03-2007 05:15:

More synths, fx and better bass

i'll work on it tommorow. it's intended to be more of a prog. trance track type.

anyone suggest a good way to construct build ups through ableton?

Posted by theognis1002 on Aug-03-2007 12:00:

u mean like volume-enveloped arpeggiated kick/snares? filter?